Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuushed

I don't care what the person above me said, I want to see more of this. Let's see the badass jack handle the land of ponies and sunshine. Keep goin and stay golden^^

Hmm Jack Vs the Everfree Forest. Jack's going to have a timberwolf fang neckess, and a manticore tail whip by the end of that day.

That is wrong, knowing Jack she is going to completely tear apart all of Ponyvile and use Pinkie Pie's skull as a helmet...this is going to be bad ass. I don't care if this is romance or not for once but I know for a fact...THIS IS GOING TO BE BADASSSS!!!!!! Keep going, dear sir or madam.I'll be tracking.

722966 For the record, I am a 'sir'. And I will continue writing this, thanks for the the positive feedback!

724099 Ok, my bad LOL, I'm male as well...not that it matters and if you need ideas or advice, I'll be sure to help. Don't forget that this is supposed to be a Spike/Twilight romance fic (I think that what it is, atleast that's what I got when I looked up romance and these two creatures) . But as said before, I honeslty don't care if this is romance or not...be sure to bit a bit of Legion when it swichs back to ME (Mass effect). This is gonig to be GOOODDDD!!!

P.S: Derpy is BOSS!!!

725735 Hm, I never really thought about making this a Twispike fic, but now I think I might. Also, if you, or anyone else, has an idea for what needs to be done or anything like that, don't hesitate to let me know. I take any and all advice and suggestions.

877506 I'm honestly hoping so I don't know....I can make up ideas like really fast...you sure you want that on your shoulders? And I'll be sure to help you every hoof step along the way bro, I got your back.

877522 Thanks, and yeah, I'm sure. Having ideas and suggestions coming from the readers makes me feel like I made someones day, and gives me that warm, fuzzy feeling one gets when they do a good deed just keep in mind that not every suggestion will get used, but I will keep them all in mind along the way. On a side note, I think I'm almost done with the next chapter, so that should be up soon!

Never a problem and you do make a really vaild point my friend.....I completely agree with you. I understand, but your right, it would not work for you if you did what everyone else wished, therefore I will aid in any way I can, starting with my first idea....How about haivng Jack unleash or join forces with one of the villians on accident, due to how she acts ands all.....or she tries to help the CMC obtian their Cutie Marks in a way...they have not tired yet, rememeber this is ratred M so you are allowed to go all out in any way possible to your heart content....maybe you should have Jack learn from Princess Luna who was a fomer villain about how to rule a kingdom, or get into a fight with Rainbow Dash and scream at Flutteshy to mare up.....if you need any more let me know, I don't think it's possible for the brain to run out of ideas. OH!...or you can have the Dark Elements intervene in the Mane Six's lives and Jack's as well.

877626......... You, sir...... Are a fucking GENIUS!!

877640 Me? Nah, not in the least...just helping ut a fellow Brony as I'll always do. Glad you might think so though...mean a lot to hear someone cares about my ideas.