Celestia feels wrong. She should be happy, considering Tirek is no longer a threat, yet she isn't. But why?
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Hmm! An interesting little slice of examination of Celestia's character in the wake of the events in question. It's kinda neat to see her wrestling with herself... her long-term justifications and habits versus her conscience. Of course Discord would pick up on that... and in a way I like how you left his attitude open to interpretation. One would expect Discord to be aggressive if not hostile... but then, he's learned a few things, so maybe he'd be more sympathetic. I'm gonna say I like it. :)
4826978 Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
I don't get it.
how is this complete ??
there is no end
we want to know whats wrong and if Discord tries to find her
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It's perfectly complete. The story was written as a glimpse into Celestia's psyche not as a story with a beginning and an end. As for what's wrong, the fact that she's trying so hard to convince herself of what /isn't/ wrong should spell it out.