I love the Brony culture and feel that stories continue the greatness of the show and enrich the fandom. I enjoy shipping stories and stories and ones with well developed storylines and characters.
a. Twilight is now married and has had a foal with Flash Sentry, and she has never been happier. Her son is going to school and making his momma proud academically, and he even has a fillyfriend! Everyone is proud of him, except for Twilight, who sees nothing but flaws in the filly trying to take her son away from him. What will she do to protect him from the evil clutches of the nicest filly in school? What will Flash do to support his son? And how will this love progress?
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Great start for a technically flashlight story, or any story. However, grammar lesson 1;
You need to have commas both before and after a character is addressed by another character, even when the speaker calls them a nickname like Sugarcube or your highness
Nice idea with this story. I like how you had Midnight get the cheese pick up lines from his Dad. Great job. Good luck with the next chapter.
Interesting read, I don't know why you would have that many dislikes from this story. I am usually hesitant to read with so many dislikes but I notice when it contains a hated ship.
Twilight, either shove him back into your womb or get the hell out of young love's way.
4815589 Thanks. I'll be trying to write a little every night, but it may be harder with school starting up again. Still glad you're enjoying it.
4815587 Thank you. I appreciate any comments about grammatical mistakes and I'll fix the ones you point out.
4836974 Same here. Good Luck though.