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wut...
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yes I know
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no seriously lol
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Cmon now
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You got the story?
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Well, you must speak its language
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bahahha you so funny
Absurdist is right. What the fuck is even this.
I give it a thumbs up and a track (I refuse to call it a favorite) for sheer absurdity.
That.... Was awesome.
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What's that?
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You wanna what?
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Oh now that's just pretty freaking epic. Lets do it!
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TRUE MODERN ART
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Such beauty...
I liked that story.
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Well, it was certainly an interesting read.
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Don't give me that, I know you liked it.
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Oh, hey. Dots. I remember those.
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What do you mean I just read a story about dots? I did no such thing.
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Oh, yeah. I liked that story.
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I did not just say that. You must have something wrong with your memory.
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Oh, hey. Dots.
It was okay, but it didn't really do it for me. A narrative or greater purpose never really emerges, and neither of the characters - if they can be called that - seem developed or consistent enough to get attached to. It's an interesting concept, but it seems to limit itself and isn't used to any great or significantly meaningful effect. The dialogue seems to flounder, jumping from concept to concept with no direction or narrative becoming clear. On top of that, it's not fun to physically read, forcing the eye to jump around the page and occasionally get lost searching for tiny dots. There's potential here, but brilliance is in the execution, not the concept, and the execution is currently lacking. Decide what kind of story you want to tell and try again. And next time, get a proofreader.
DOTS.
GOD I LOVE DOTS.
DEAR PRINCESS CELESTIA...
I'M SO ALONE
Ahem, in all seriousness though; I commend you for taking the effort to try and spring something new and fresh here. While I do think that the idea is really creative, it just really didn't do much for me personally. That might just be personal preference though. Have a thumb.
Not a bad idea. Not really interesting towards the end but it did hold my attention all the way through.
Quite interesting...
Will be tracking.
This idea is pretty interesting.. strange~ but very interesting indeed
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Nice. I like to imagine the dots are- Do not tell anyone. Their minds will explode. Things! MY MIND!
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Haha, good. Any person who understands absurdist pieces will find it funny.
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Thank you sir, I shall send you a spike in return.
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"What is humor, when we all have the inability to laugh at ones-self? To laugh at ones-self is not to feel a fool, but to feel enlightened from what we have learned."
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haha, well if you enjoyed it. More will be on the way.
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Ah, you're on the right track there friend.
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"Silence is golden, but to every silence there is a silver lining that not only brings character and meaning to silence, it gives it purpose."
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*Takes a bow* Thank you sir. I my-self am a lover of modern art and when the idea for this popped into my mind, I had to do it. I'm glad you enjoy it so much and am glad to tell you more will be on the way.
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haha, I think your dots have more character in them than mine.
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Sir, you have just given a text book definition of absurdisim and for you to get to a such a stage in where you describe my story to be as such that it could be taken out of a text book... well then it means I've hit Absurdity on the head with a five ton hammer.
(And that makes me happy) If you're into research Link Its a wiki of Waiting for Godot, an absurdist piece that has had a huge influence on my life.
Although with the spacing, I wanted the silence to become is own character, to have its own meaning and purpose. Do you feel that if I had aligned it with the spoken text that it would still have the same impact?
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Have some dots to keep you company.
but thank you, this first piece was pure absurdisim, no holding back on anything. but I want to see if following chapters if I can break the rules a bit and have climaxes in the story! With characters that actually develop! Wouldn't that be just grand?
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The idea of absurdisim is for you to leave with a feeling of frustration and confusion. Its the way absurdisim works.
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More on the way.
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Hehe, come here Pop's gimme a hug.
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Ahhh! Its almost as bad as dividing by zero! Run for the hills!
447527 GOOD SHOW!!! JOLLY GOOD SHOW!! AHAHAHAHAHA~
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