Twilight Sparkle must now pick up her own life and becoming the supreme princess of Equestria, but is she ready to face this task alone? And what else will become of her? Will she follow in her mentor's footsteps, or bring a new complete rule to Equestria?
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what about cadence? also great story
F**k I need to read more...
It was a nice story, very touching.
Only a draf right? so you are aware of the small mistakes i guess.
But still this story is beautiful,
The paragraphs are too long. You should check that out ....
Well, nothing more, i hope you can fix this and add the next chapter
Long paragraphs are my way of writing.
I group together things that I think are connected in paragraphs, so some a long and some are short.
I still have to go through and fix some things, yes.
And thank you.
I am currently working on the second part.
And thanks.
4860997 Cadence will be in the second part, along with Twilight's brother.
4866294 then celestia and luna would of already died then, your logic is confusing
I liked it. It will be interesting to see Twilight take over the sun, and what it's energies will do to her. as magically powerful as she is already....
It would be easy enough for Cadense to take over the moon from the crystal empire but the interaction where she has to pass that duty on to her... wow. Also I'm guessing Twilight would have to leave Ponyville for Canterlot so the town doesn't get bombarded with people flocking to there new ruler. Might be a good change for her seeing as Her castle can only remind her of loss right now.
next chapter sounds like it's gonna have a lot happening, Regime change, funerals for Luna and Celestia, Re-Crowning of a Twilight... can't wait!
4866322 What do you mean?
4870405 Thank you haha.
With school and everything, I'm trying to find as much time as possible to write.
4875716 there was already another alicorn before twilight
4875777 Well yeah, duh.
But Cadence can't take on Equestria and The Crystal Empire, too.
Besides, her destiny isn't to be the ruler of Equestria.
At least, it isn't it my story. It's Twilight.