• Published 17th Jul 2014
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A little find - DWriter



A human saves a homeless pone. Unfortunately, his intentions are less than pure...

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Comments ( 17 )

Hmm. It goes where I think ti goes?

What is schedule? Twice a year?

7722151
Better than nothing I guess. I was surprised when I saw the update on my feed.

The stolkholm stndrom is working on the poor pony.

Oh my, an update!

*after finishing it*

Okay, a couple thoughts:
-mind break
-all the way through
-size difference

Normally these aren't my fetishes, but... damn!

Also, I just realized how little she is, therefore, how little ponies are!
I hate it when people make the ponies human sized or heck, taller than 1.2 meters, but in this story, they are so tiny!

7722151 Valid question, based on the previous release dates we will see the next chapter in 2017's June or so. :I
7722333 Oh yes, Stockholm Syndrome all the way! This story uses it all too well, isn't it? :D

Well, let's hope we will see more soon.

I see you've made ponies incredibly small in this story, while I'm not a huge fan of huge size difference you write quite well and look forward to the next update!:twilightsmile:

Ah, this just popped into my mind.
The theme of the end of the 4th chapter.

even though it took forever, this story is hitting so many of my niche fetishes that its worth it.

Your story gives me shivers every time I read a chapter.
Please, find it in your heart to shorten your schedule of 'two updates per year'.
Is it possible to have it be at least once every two months ?

Please ?! :trixieshiftright:

7726361 A perfect theme for the ending of chapter four. Indeed, I wholeheartedly agree.

You sure have started the dark side of the story but bright out some version of the light to it. I would like to see how the story ends. :twilightsmile:

Hell of a note to leave off on.

Interesting concept. I like it.

Well well.
It's the October of 2017, so even my almost a year old assumption is out of date.
When will an update happen? I (and I assume a couple others) have been waiting for a looong time now!

New chapter please?

Hopefully, the author will remember that life, is best lived whenever we see to complete our goals.
So, hopefully, I think an update will come to us, perhaps, in 2019 ? :scootangel:

Eh, not the worst way this story could have been left incomplete. And although an outline of the rest of the story would've been nice, I'll take what I've got and be thankful for it.

I don't think you'll ever read this, DWriter, but the story you crafted was fantastic and, indeed, a unique take on the "Human saves homeless pone" subgenre. I may not know you, but I do genuinely wish you the best of luck in life, and hope you're doing well.

she told him, it was alright, she could be his toy, and she could make him feel good, and she could do whatever else he wanted, just as long as he’d stay with her, and not leave her in the dark anymore

Oh this mare got stockholm syndrome pretty bad.

I really wish to have a happy ending for her but I don't think that's ever gonna happen.

Почему история мертва она хорошая?!

Автор, ты живой?

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