It's not easy dealing with the loss of someone. Not even after an accident that wasn't done by Fluttershy. So why does she feel like it's her fault? First attempt at writing something.
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Churro33
A new writer venturing the world unknown as I write stories coming from my imagination.
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Good start great detail but i wouldn't go into much gore and there has to be a slice of life because its reflecting off of real world events. But good so far keep up the good work
I dont usually favorite but i see great potential to this story good luck writing message me if you need an editor or need some ideas because i have a lot of ideas
4711231 Yea I'm going to need an editor for the next part. It's going to focus on the theme of grief, but a self blame.
4711267 yeah i can edit it when ever you need it:)
4711274 I'll let you know.
4711329 kk just send me the story I'll edit it and send it back
No problem dude I can keep editing your story's if you want
Awesomesauce!
Sup im ice lightning rember your editor be happy to edit your work more love your writing and i encourage you to right more love it keep up the good work