I liked the chapter. Especially Mal's teasing of Twilight and the flirting he does with Celestia and Luna.

Mal is a bit like me, if i were more verbal.
You know is going to understand that.
I DID!!!
We share the same mind, remember?
OH!! Right.
Other than that^, i liked this chapter simply for its morbid/ tame hilarity, mainly Mal is really, Really entertaining. makes me laugh every time he jokes with anypony.

5149935 Well, thank you for that! I honestly was hoping that I could get him to be funny yet tame. It's not the easiest thing to do, but not the hardest.

Great job on the story so far! Love it!

5150160 Well, you pull it off pretty good.

rape

Why everytime he say rape, the mare are blush?
....Ohhhhhh

5150338 thank you! I'll try to keep people interested and to be honest, I wasn't expecting this kind of reaction. I was really expecting to get a lot of hate, or this story flat out sucking! I love the fact that it didn't turn out like that.

Love the concept.

I'm a bit wary of the way that the main character is extremely powerful- almost like a self-insert. Some people really hate that. It doesn't bother me as much though.

5207328 I already said I have plans for that issue. He seems strong but he will be put in situations that will test his mettle whether as a savior to the ponies or a enemy to griffins. Or even relationship problems that I WILL add into this story.

It's crazy, when I posted this story, I expected a lot of people to hate it or for a lot of down votes, but instead, I get over 20 favorites and 62 likes and only 19 dislikes. This is really amazing to me and I thank all of the people that have liked or favorited this story. It means a lot to me that this turned out this way. Btw, next chapter is in the making. I've already passed the 6000 word mark, so you all will have a lot to read

Pretty creative of him to deal with twi

5226767 I try!

This I is a very good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.

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