A HiE fic about one CIA deep cover assassin that was betrayed and killed by the ones he trusted. Now he finds himself in Equestria with nothing but the clothes on his back and his blades. Oh and don't forget his magic!
4835803 For your first question the answer is: wait and see. For your second, no the story takes place at the beginning of season three, but it will be non-cannon. It will however have some things that are cannon.
Nice start but I can't really feel the characters when they talks. No offense, but they just seem to talk and aren't much in character. Still though I shall move onto the next chapter. Keep up the great work. Also, add an extra space between paragraphs. It takes reading much easier.
question #1 will the celestial sisters be'involved' with the main guy?
question #2 could you consider this taking place during season 1 or just b4?
4835803 For your first question the answer is: wait and see.
For your second, no the story takes place at the beginning of season three, but it will be non-cannon. It will however have some things that are cannon.
ok
This looks promising, keep it up.
4837849 Thanks! And I sure will
I argree withToa from Siberia this look promising cant wait to see where this goes.
4845753 I'll do my best to keep you guys interested!
I like it. Good plot. Sealed the deal with anthro and sex. Two of my requirements for a good story.
4867300 Well then I hope I can keep it that way!
Nice start but I can't really feel the characters when they talks. No offense, but they just seem to talk and aren't much in character. Still though I shall move onto the next chapter. Keep up the great work. Also, add an extra space between paragraphs. It takes reading much easier.