555247Yesyesyesyeyseysyesyesyesyeysyesyes i cant wait love how you put so much detail into it with out puint to much in cant wait tio see how it turns out ill be wathcing
555353wellthats a tough choice but id asy every other chapter cause sex is just an accent to the story too much of it and it is no longer a good story just shameless cloping and most people like a good story
first
554732
Lol, really Spirit?
yes really
554860
Heehee.
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also you need to make more chapters
this was really good>>554907
555221
You don't know how hard I 'squeed' when you said that. Thank you SO much! :)
(Now that you meantion it, I just might!)
555247Yesyesyesyeyseysyesyesyesyeysyesyes
i cant wait
love how you put so much detail into it with out puint to much in cant wait tio see how it turns out
ill be wathcing
555263
Lol, thanks, I thought I was going overboard with the details. I'll make sure that the next chapter will be just as good, if not, then better!
(Will start on it as soon as possible!)
555263
Oh, and I'd like to know, should I have clop in every chapter or maybe like, every other?
555353wellthats a tough choice but id asy every other chapter cause sex is just an accent to the story
too much of it and it is no longer a good story just shameless cloping
and most people like a good story
555372
Thank you once more! Du-ally noted!
I'll try and get an actual plot into the story, wish me luck.
555391yay
fare weather and following seas my dear sir
About halfway through the third paragraph, I said to myself
"If i see the word "Partner" one more time I'm not reading this."
556359
My bad. I think.
556359
P.S.
Did you stop reading?
omg your so