• Member Since 10th Jul, 2014
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RainMuffin


I LOVE! to write fanfictions, I even turn some of my older stories, into pony storys because of lost inspiration!

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A fan fiction about fan characters of MLP.
A young colt finds himself the center of attention in his new group of friends, and after being the loner for half of his school years he is awkwardly confused, but just as soon as he thinks he has the group figured out, everything changes. One of his friends long lost twin sister gets kidnapped because of a strange power she holds inside. Watch what happens he and his newly found friends make their way across equestria to find this young mare and save her from disaster!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 1 )

Look man, I know it's the prologue, but really it should be at least 1,000 words. Just a little hint for next time, most reviewers (like me) look for 1,000 minimum and 4,000 max per chapter. Unless your whole story is one chapter, it's should be at least 10,000 words.

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