Cadence and Shining Armor have a beautiful little Filly named Sketch. But after Queen Chrysalis hears about it she wants her revenge, so for the safety of Sketch, they send her to Ponyville to live with her aunt Twilight and the other elements of harmony.
But, she is disguised as a Pegasus, who always wears a big hat that covers her horn. Her name was also changed to Paint.
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Omc! There's side Fluttercord and screwball! I'm totally faveing this. Tiny nitpick, there should be more descriptions. But don't go over board. This looks great though!
I was confused at first
but I kinda understand it. But since when does Screwball have a twin brother? Not that I'm saying it's a bad choice or anything just that it's kinda unexpected
4765649 Well I added him for the story. Most of the characters play a big part.
Gah! floating heads!
You know, this story a little more revealing then I thought
. Maybe in the next chapter you can add a little secret waiting to be revealed near the end. Not that I'm saying it's bad but it's just a thought, no biggie. 
twist ending. The daughter meets a changeling who is the off spring of chrysalis and shining armor
nah I will give this a try and see where it goes
Actually this is a good chapter. You earned another favorite, your welcome
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