It is a lovely day at Santa's bar in the North Pole; a day which is promptly ruined, thanks to the antics of Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Trolls, the occasional Eskimo, and one annoying little brother trying to steal the spotlight by breaking the fourth wall! Will Judy the elf be able to make it through the day without loosing her mind? Read on to find out!
[This was originally written in five minutes to bring about the end of a pointless comment war. It's just a silly crossover fanfic, about My Little Pony, The Santa Clause, and Homestuck, with a twist punch line! Enjoy?]
Chapters (1)
First one to comment after this gets a cookie!
Lol... this was great!
4663043 What kind of cookie?
Nevermind... It isnt mine anyway....
I maded a mistake...
Just continue on as if this never happened....
First part:
A little too long compared to "the actual" story. Either short it down, or add more meat to the main story. (I like the idea that the big-brother has a show on air of sorts)
Second part:
Hmm, at first it sounded like you were about to tell a joke.
Then it just went, well, let's just say the tag fit
In the end; you finished with a decent punch-line.
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Thanks! It was just a silly little thing to test out Fimfiction after all! X)