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1. They never referenced eating meat in the show, so tried to stick to that fact. I'd personally hate not being able to eat meat. Over time it'll be established to the ponies that he's an omnivore, but there's limits of what he can ask for, such as meat.
2. 'Cause I like it. :p
She's not going to get any less awkward. She's aimed to be a very toned down version of Stalkershy, just a lot less reference to NSFW, more or less just jealousy and determination. It'll be established why she's acting like she is eventually, there's a reason for it aside from the conveyed reason so far.
i think the format of the story looks very confusing. the start made think it was dream and wasnt very clear if it was a flashback. using italics on flashbacks or dreams is helpful to let the reader know its a memory or dream.
as for the story i think its taken an interesting turn with the voice in his head although this could just be an hallucination.
Don't let it get out... Creepy as hell. xD