Oh Damn... Well, it's time to see what rough beast slouches toward Bethlehem to be born. This has proven to be entertaining, and honestly I've enjoyed the characterization so far. I shall keep watch to see what else you bring to the metaphorical table.

Man... First you scare me with the dream. And now this.The dream monster changing the memorised song to give out hints of his headaches. Then warnings in form of headaches and now i think that it istn "a" monster it is "him" a phsycolocigal created monster of himself that comes from a traumatic experiance. It could be that or something else. We all have certanily have heard some ghost stories of demons taking over the mind slowly and the warnings of its rise in power usualy is headaches and dizziness. Thenthe nightmares are interresting. Since it has already proven to know about everything that has happened to him by changing the lullaby therefore ut could be psychological or something "alive". Anyway it is a very intressting story and i hope i dont get nightmares tonight....

oh nice chapter! i loved it

It was hard to tell who was talking and who was listening at the time.

4679280 I apologize if the distinction between dialogue is a bit confusing, from my perspective, the focus revolves around interaction rather than speech. I do use a lot of excessive 'he says' and 'she says', your comment is noted :)

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