Heyo, I'm a gamer and a musician. I live in Cali, but I'm not a very active person. However, I do have a PS4 and a 360. PSN: CynicalBrony GT:Glazed Brony N7.
Over a thousand years have past since the Riots of the Night, and their legacy is no more than whispers that live in shadows. However, scarce is it known that the leader of the rebellion was none other than Celestia's own pupil, Shadow Eclipse.
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4670064 Sure!
But, just curious, what did you like about the story?
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I also like your OC she seems well considered just make certain to mention her weakness as well as her strengths!
Mmmm if I had to pick one thing? So far I enjoy the fact that Tia and Twi are playing chess while Tia is telling the story. Chess is a invaluable tool to gauge reactions to a persons or in this case ponies mind.
So far you seem to be using it in such a fashion so ^^ Yay
4670288 Alrighty!
Great job on this story so far, I can't wait to see more of it! You've done an impeccable job with the grammar and pacing (something that is easily messed up) and it certainly has a unique plot. Keep up the good work!
4671150 Thanks man! Second story, and I appreciate the critique!
4671211 No problem! This is great for only being your second story, I'm impressed!
4671221 Thanks! I like writing stuff, but just keep putting it off.
Procrastinating tends to do that >.<
4671224 I know the feeling, I love writing and I've been meaning to write a story on here for a while and I did start one a while back but I procrastinated a lot with it. Reading what I had now I'm just frustrated with it because I can't seem to get it the way I want!
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Ain't that the truth!
Tried writing one a while back, and it was well over 4,000 words, well written, but it didn't fit the specifications of being able to make the site; so, couple days ago, wrote a story in 3 hours and decided to post it!
4671248 That sucks! I would hate to work hard on something only for it not to be posted! And man, 4 hours?! Wow.
4671254 Yeah, it was a draft. It was a rough draft.......a draft.
But, got a good like/dislike ratio, and got almost 200 views. I'm happy with that!
4671256 That's good, I'll have to check it out!
If you don't mind, can you please source your coverart?
4672799 https://derpibooru.org/522678?scope=scpe29cbdc8513d5d86b32880b75290693a63ba05d6f
4679737 Thanks.