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568831 It sounds like a good idea! (How the hell did you read my mind?! Honestly! )
569283
nome taken i guess i did not give THAT many details to him for the author to work with personality wise.
569846
I really love your fan fic
569283 okay i sent a msg so if this works out sight SHOULD have some more personality traits then just "happy go lucky guy who is kind to everyone" also if this also works out he should also have some negative personality traits (you know ones that are not good like someone being defensive a lot or something)
>>BBB ok ty im not trying to be mean its just at this point he was a character that would not be worth looking more in to if he changes and becomes a better all aroind character i would love to see it from uis eyes
575419 from his eyes?
well the reason that has not happened is ary simple becuase if you notice there is not many parts where the author switchs charecter perspective.
576286 he did it alot in his first story
577344
well he aint doing it alot in this story...
okay not that i am criticizeing him or anything...
but if he has more sight parts he might develope his charecter better and become more comfortable with him.
pretty much if he allows the audience to see from sights eyes more often and maybe almost as often as he has for dustin maybe he will be able to do sights charecter better.
what is your opioion on sight?
also for the record the human thing is NOT my idea... i think he got the david thing from me acidentaly typeing in david instead of dustin when i was sending in the idea for cold iron.