It is the time when Equestria was new, long before jealousy split the Royal Pony Sisters. The magic of friendship united the three tribes and freed the land from the icy grip of the windigoes. Yet this thaw uncovered more dangers for the nascent pony nation.
Red Tornado, general of the pony army, stands before his griffon counterpart, ready to accept his surrender. Equestria will finally be free of war. Now, this pony who was born to lead armies must decide what to do when his destiny is complete. He must reflect on his own immortality.
Written for Obselescence’s The Most Dangerous Game contest.
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Excellently done. You haven't just displayed headcanon, you've also analyzed its consequences, and what it means to be a demigod of war in as peaceful a land as Equestria. I look forward to further exploration of this world. Best of luck in the contest.
Not bad.
Nicely done, very good world building.
So, alicorns are sustained by their little ponies' emotions... no wonder they don't like changelings.
The difference then is that changelings still are stone age hunter-gatherers while alicorns have progressed to iron age farming.
Alright, entirely unrelated but your story got me musing on this.
I really enjoyed reading this; and you certainly got a very nice character out of your alicorn OC.
Good work.