Aeris was different. He didn't want war. He didn't want conflict. Yet, still, he was dragged into a civil war caused by the death of the changeling he held closest to his heart: Casilia, his elder sister.
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Uhh not sure if I want to read it anymore. First strange acting of Celestia , naive acting of them overall (yea I won't backstab you just because), OP main character (bleeeh), using real units name and overall is damn fast paced.
4610849 thanks for that, I'm not too great at writing...as you know, and any feedback is good feedback to me, and ill do my best to edit some. So...I'll be taking this chapter down and probably upload it again tonight or tomorrow.
You need to be patient and confident. Two virtues that are imperative to writting. Also never forget the "Show don't tell" rule.