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Stream Star was just an average Pegasus who worked in Canterlot, was married, and happily loved by many. Until all of it turns for the worse, he was fired and was divorced, after one little mistake that he had made causing everyone to panic. He was shunned, hated, finally he had enough of it and got on a train to get away from the problems, hoping it would fix it. But it only got worse when the train began to go faster and slowly began to go off it's hinges and off the cliff and into the Everfree Forest. Fortunately, Stream had survived and nursed by a kind; yet shy, pony by the name of Fluttershy.

Just a story that would keep you guys entertained as I worked on the big story, sorry it's taking so long but my editor is very busy and barely has time to work on it, though it's not his fault I decided to work on some other stories while he edits the one. Anyway, I had this thought that just popped into my head and decided why not? ~Enjoy

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 31 )

Well you got my attention with this story let's see where this goes :pinkiehappy:

4617415 I just hope you like it, that's all I care about. :pinkiehappy:

When's the next chapter?

4617984 It might be awhile, :derpyderp1: I'm proof reading this story myself so... :twilightsmile:

4617824 I bet you'll like it :pinkiehappy:

The choice between life or death a cliche yes but effective.
Also poor stallion the only one who got a almost fatal injury damn you to hell fate :flutterrage:
And finally still interested in this please do continue :pinkiehappy:

4625576 Well, what did you think was going to happen. :derpytongue2: Other Cliches? :rainbowderp:

I'm also glad that you are enjoying my story, I really appreciate it. :pinkiehappy:

That's is an awesome story you should really update.
why did you make it only him that got the worst injury but still effective.
awesome way in making him chose life or death.

4630359 1. Thank you, I didn't really expect all the support to be honest. :heart: :pinkiehappy: :derpytongue2:

2. Well, let's just say he's having bad luck right now. :ajsmug:

3. Yeah, I kind of stole the life and death situation from a story. :rainbowlaugh: :derpytongue2:

Well well well the plot thickens and as for why he was targeted ...
I would say it would be because of the error he made but his mistake didn't actually killed a pony so ...
I haven't the faintest idea which is great don't want to guess the plot too easily.
And yes I like it so far :pinkiehappy:

Liked the late reaction of Stream :rainbowlaugh:
And you still have my attention with this, please do go on my friend :pinkiehappy:

dont make it end so soon:fluttercry: get to the wedding chap

4677597
Forget the wedding chap make it a clop fic!!!
Fluttershy would love it.

4677597 A Wedding huh...? :ajsmug: I guess I could make one more chapter before the Epilogue. :pinkiesmile: It's going to be the first time I ever make a wedding chapter so... :derpytongue2:


4677923 If you follow me, I'm going to be making a story with slight clop. :pinkiehappy: Oh, and just to let you know, there's going to be a story related to this one before I make the other one. Try figuring that one out. :rainbowlaugh:

Wait that guy, or pony in that case, back in sugarcube corner called thee! Twilight Sparkle! A bitch!? How come he isn't to the moon already!? :twilightoops:

Wait I think I know who's the Culprit!:pinkiegasp:

And had sex
:pinkiehappy:
wedding so sad i almost cry
y did it haf to end:fluttershbad:

4684574 I'm sorry, everything comes to an end. :raritycry:

And it ends ... well what to say it was a good story I really enjoyed it.
Simple yet I really wanted to know what would happen next.
The romance came a bit quickly I think but It was well done so to hell with it :pinkiehappy:
And finally waiting for you next story with impatience :twilightsmile:

4688641 I just finished the first chapter of it, releasing it tomorrow. :pinkiehappy:

And I'm really happy that you enjoyed by story. :derpytongue2:

Good story. Short but pretty decent.:twilightsmile:

This Flutter-shipping is approved by Angel and all animals. There is an animal-army supporting this ship. Along with me. :twilightsmile:

I have an idea of who the culprit is, if this story is following the cliche of betrayal.

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