Celestia takes a vacation from being good, intending to blame all her actions on Chrysalis, who she has captured. What has caused such a change in her?
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Aside from the disgusting horrors done to the pair, what really bothers me here is that
At this point, Shining Armour would actually experience a magic surge, because of the agony he feels and extremely emotional situation.
By that alone he should be able to free both of them, in support with cadence, it is even guaranteed to happen.
But this gets completely ignored, making them helpless victims.
What I also wonder about is that discord, due to all this strange activity, doesn't wake up again, and fucks up Celestia for good because she got nothing on him in terms of power.
7239002 Re read the story, last chapter twilight shattered his horn.
He also retconned the story to deal with Discord
when the slab was coming down on Cadence, i was thinking about the part in Spongebob when he was blowing at the glue on the wall to stop it from going on MR. Krab's paintings.
After reading the story multiple times, just now I noticed something that doesn't really adds up:the main reason Twilight listens to Celestia is that she is afraid of torture and death.But in the chapter whwre she knocks Celestia up, she willingly gives up her soul, then in this chapter Celestia says that "Twilight obeys her because she lives on borrowed time".So which one is it:is Twi still afraid or very corrupted?
As a mention:I wouldn't call this a plot hole, just something anticlimatic
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I'll just say that broken people aren't really capable of the same logic that they were before.