Canterlot's Herald:
"Aliens in Ponyville! Authorities hide!!!
Why does Pony in Black do nothing?
Why does Princess Celestia keep silence?
What is Princess Luna watching for?
Every thing is damned by Discord!
In the end why is Rainbow Dash resentful?
About these and many other things you will NOT read in this issue.
And yet why is Rainbow Dash resentful?"
This game is addictive... so much.
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So... is this good or bad?
Arthelis favourited Robot Unicorn Attack
11:45pm - Hey, you even don't know ending yet and already favorite... hmm
The idea intrigues me...
The lack of paragraphs/spacing throws me however.
If you can I would say get an editor and/or a proofreader.
This is an interesting idea, and I look forward to seeing more
4571112 The beggining of the fic was irrelevant and crazy but i want to see more.
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Well, maybe you will recommend someone?
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No problem - after correction. My corrector is my English pen-friend. And he makes this not so fast. But story is complete.
I favored you, but come on man fix this up I barley understand it
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Everything after correction - I don't want to feel any shame cause of my English grammar or punctuation.
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Alright then. Hope to see the updated version!