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Cody Da Brony
Live for Ponies. Die for Ponies (and GTA)
Cody Da Brony
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well it wasn't that bad but you're still a sick fuck
I can just imagine a freaked out Luna just standing there like "what the fuck is the matter with this kid holy shit... Thou art nothing but a sick fuck scootaloo"
Oh God. That picture is now forever ruined (and takes on a whole new creepy context).
Nice short story, but I noticed a mistake you did with your dialogue. Whenever you ended the dialogue, you put a period, when you're suppose to put a comma. I hope that made sense, lol
That was the nicest grimdark I've ever read. But good effort on your part, writing grimdarks is just something you're born with though.
Implying that R. Lee Ermey was her father or something.
How does she even know what the act of cumming is?
My only piece of advice: Details! That is all.
~DustyPwny
I have seen more intelligent things... this comes to mind
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i.imgur.com/msF6G.gif
Details details and pacing
4592487 the world is a messed up place.
4591946 Indeed.
4591861 I know. At least it was a dream and not real.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..........................................................................................
4594011 I'm going to be straight. I did NOT like writing it.
4594605 then why write it?
(Btw it was a groan not a scream)
4594622 It was requested by a friend.
4594628 ok. What did they ask for specificly?
4594637 He found the cover picture and wanted a rape story, so I put a crappy story together.
4594665 Ah. Hmmmm.......
4594673 Indeed. I would much rather write a shipping story.
4594680 Short. Not very descriptive. No grammar errors I've saw. Came expecting more from this. 2.5/5
4595377 I didn't want to go in depth in this very much. Again, I didn't like writing it.
4595422 That's the kind of story you should write in a .txt and send to someone through Skype, rather then post for all to read. This story turned me away from your other stuff. I'll give one a try now, though, since this appears to not be your best work, which would you suggest? Any other fics worth reading otherwise? I'm shit out of stories at the moment.
4595422 >looks in your story list
>sees you have one other story
>...oh.
4595585 Eh. I don't really care. If you like it you like it. If ya don't ya don't.
4593892
I think you mean "the fandom".
4596038 Ah, yes. The fandom is also a messed up place.
4595573
This is how I feel.
I think you should have a part about Luna seeing this dream
4603612 I may put an epilogue.
I would have Luna have nightmares about this dream.
4604499 I have a funny way to take this.
The reason that would be funny is Luna controls dreams also rainbow should hear about this dream.
4604509 Luna done goofed in the Epilogue. Just wait, I'm typing it now.
Let me know when you post it I can't wait to read it. Just write a comment so I will know.
4604522 K. I have an airsoft tournament Monday and I've been practicing a lot recently. I'm determined to win. I've only been shot twice.
Hang on I'll send you an email
This sounds complete. Is it complete?
4605076 Yeah sorry. Just completed it today.
4604883 I know.
it was meant to be.
4604648 didn't get any mail if you sent an email.
Sorry my brother screwed up my email.
4606504 Siblings. They drive me crazy too
'll you the truth I rather be locked in a room with twilight in lecture mode or pinkie pie hiped up on sugar.
4607538
Same.
10/10
4607711 you should try it with two energetic brothers that you being mad is fun.