This universe of yours is very dirty, Twilight's point of view is something I enjoyed I have came to terms with the writing style at long last. oh I was have such a daydream of Twilight dominating Celestia with toys and magic, such sweet passion. Oh I love vampirism it makes me drool in delight my third fetish, oh the thought of Vampire twilight makes me flush so many erotic nights. Candece looked so beautiful her tease not only swayed Twilight eyes but mine as well I saw it within my mind so alluring.

Hmm Shining Armor in another stallion's bed I tried to picture that and broke out into laugher I wish you would have brought that up in Twilight and Candance's conversation. that would have been interesting. Your sex scene was good yes I would have expected more detail like sweating, sucking and stuff but it was good none the less. I deeply enjoyed it

good stuff, will you be doing the chimera of fire swamp next or perhaps windigoes?

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Nope.

Good ideas, though.

6942632 ah okay then. (I only brought the chimera thing up cause my friend wonder what would happen if the chimera one up applejack.)