Hmm that was quite an intresting read, I enjoyed Tsukuyo very much and its a pleasure to see Sunset and Fluttershy's relationship going strong. However unlike Shying Sunsets this chapter's love scene while good pales in comparison to the others. I found Rainbow Dash's point of view to be quite annoying but since I dislike first person to begin with its something I have to deal with so no fault done.
I wonder if the centaur story is also a part of this universe.
6028570 Yup, thanks for fixing it. I sorta guessed that's what it was supposed to say, but it really threw me off when I was reading it, and I had to stop to think about it.
The fact that it's both consensual and basically little more than a sedative kind of defanged any hypnosis fetish aspect this had.
Hmm that was quite an intresting read, I enjoyed Tsukuyo very much and its a pleasure to see Sunset and Fluttershy's relationship going strong. However unlike Shying Sunsets this chapter's love scene while good pales in comparison to the others. I found Rainbow Dash's point of view to be quite annoying but since I dislike first person to begin with its something I have to deal with so no fault done.
I wonder if the centaur story is also a part of this universe.
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Dang. I knew something was off ...
Hopefully the next chapter - whenever that's done - will fare better.
"It's supposed to make prey relax so it's easier for me to eat, but don't worry, I'm gonna do that to you.”
This..... REALLY confused me.
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It's just a typo. It's supposed to say "It's supposed to make prey relax so it's easier for me to eat, but don't worry, I'm not gonna do that to you."
Make more sense now?
6028570 Yup, thanks for fixing it. I sorta guessed that's what it was supposed to say, but it really threw me off when I was reading it, and I had to stop to think about it.
Absolutely lovely! I can't wait to see who's next, both the mare and the monster.
This is actually really cute, in an hilariously creepy-crawly way (ugh, spiders!).
And I thought I was an arachnophiliac
Didn't hit many fetish buttons, but it was pretty hilarious at the end.
BURN THEM! BURN THEM ALL!!
WITH FIRE!!
Ehem... I don't like spiders.