Stalin sat at his chair in his office. He looked outside the windows of the Kremlin to see the German army laying siege to Moscow. The Red Army continued to try to fight off the Fascist hordes. Recently Stalingrad was re-captured by the Red Army. It was the only good news to come to the Kremlin in months. Stalin sighed. He hoped for the best. He sat in chair and puffed his cigar. "God damned Germans." He said. "Why can't they just let our peoples live in peace?" Stalin continued to stare out the window. Watching his men fall and countless numbers of blood be splattered on the ground. Stalin closed his eyes and tried not to look.
There was a bright flash of purple light in Stalin's office. Papers were rustled and books fell off the bookshelf. Stalin stood looking bewildered. He reached for his Tokarev TT-33 pistol and pointed at Twilight who had just arrived. Twilight was in shock she did not know what the pistol was nor did she know who this human was. Stalin proceeded to ask her "Who are you?!? Did the Germans send you?" Twilight had a look of pure fear on her face. "No no I was sent by Princess Celestia. She says your world is filled with war and lacking in peace and friendship." Stalin laughed as he put his pistol down on his desk. "Well then what did she think she was going to do by sending you? Obviously we are very different. The USSR is a communist country while where you come from is a filthy capitalist monarchy." Twilight then preceded to say "Please we need to put our differences aside to try to ally with each other to defeat the Germans. They are obviously what the problem is." Stalin laughed once more. "Purple horse me and you shall get along well." Twilight smiled at Stalin. "I'm not a horse I am a pony." Stalin then asked her "There is one thing you are forgetting once word gets out of your presence I'm not sure all of my people will be accepting of you as I am." Twilight frowned. "I guess your right." "Come now pony the first thing we must do is tell my generals of your appearance. They will know how to get the word out to the public without causing mass panic."
Twilight and Stalin walked through the halls of the Kremlin. There were various paintings and posters up praising communism. "So this Friendship you speak of," Stalin asked "We do have some here but what is the difference?" Twilight laughed. "Well the major difference is that we are much closer to everypony and where we come from violence has not existed for 1000 years." Stalin was bewildered. "1000 years? Impossible." Twilight smiled at Stalin. "I can assure you Mr.Stalin we are a race of very peaceful beings." Stalin reached the door the the war room. The Russian redwood door stared back at Twilight and Stalin. "Twilight go over there behind the statue of comrade Lenin. I will handle this." With that Stalin entered the war room. In the war room was a table,around the table were high ranking commanders in the Soviet Military. Comrade Zhukov stood vigilant. He held a stick pointing at many German divisions on the map on the table. Other commanders were present as well. "Comrade Stalin,I'm so happy of you to join us. We have been making major progress. The 3rd army has pushed the Wehrmacht out about 10 miles from Moscow. "That is excellent comrades but I have something very important to share with you." "Comrade Stalin please show us." With that Twilight entered the war room.
Ponies on earth. nice name.
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I must remember to read this later, I can't believe Rainbow Dash is going to Germany...
Okay, yeah, I can see so many problems with this story just by reading the first 2 Chapters.
First off would, of course, be the writing. Start a new paragraph each time someone talks.
Second, from what I can gather from the second chapter, you've got things messed up. The battle of Moscow was from October of 1941 to January of 1942, whereas Stalingrad was August of '42 to Feburary of '43.
Third, you're sending the ponies to create friendship between the nations. I don't know if you know this, but Hitler literally rose to power using hate, as well as Mussolini. Hate against Jews, Gypsies, Poles, and other foreigners, not to mention that in '42 the trains to the concentration camps would start rolling. Also, you kinda forget the fact that he also betrayed the alliance between the Soviet Union and Nazi Germany by invading the Soviet Union, basically making the Soviets want German blood in return, especially after Stalingrad where 1.25 to 1.6 million Soviets were killed (That's just soldiers, casualties with citizens it's speculated to be between 4 and 6 million.)
Fourth, just like Nazi Germany attacking Soviet Union, the US would have already been attacked by Japan in Pearl Harbor, Again, from what I can tell, your story is at late '42, meaning the battle of Guadalcanal was happening, and American soldiers would be fighting the IJA in a battle that would choose the fate of whether or not Japan could invade Australia. Not to mention the fact that Japan at this point had already taken over not only most of the islands in the Pacific, but also almost all or parts of China, Korea, Vietnam, Mongolia, Manchuria, Thailand, The Indies controlled by France and Netherlands, Taiwan, Burma, Philippines, Hainan, and much more.
And finally we come to the British forces fighting Nazi Germany and Italy with the help of Americans and much more countries such as Canada, Australia, Free French, Greece, Poland, Czechoslovakia, New Zealand, and South Africa. London and most of England would have already been bombed by Nazi Germany in 1940 right after Germany had taken France over, basically inciting the flames for wanting revenge in Northern Africa and later Italy.
If you can't really tell what I'm saying, it's simple. There would be so much hate for one another, that it would be impossible for the ponies to bring friendship between the nations. In fact, some of that hate still exists today, such as China and N./S. Korea despising Japan for what Imperial Japan did.
Poodicus has it all in bold for you buddy. When you use real life subjects people are going to get on to you about every little thing.
With something as huge at WW2, genuine peace would be damned near impossible. The only solution and I mean ONLY solution is if the people of literally every country involved was to just come up front and say, "We're not fighting anymore," and BOOM, no more power to the leaders.
With all historical blasphemy aside, I'm laughing my ass off at this whole situation and that someone like Stalin wouldn't immediately capture Twilight and have some sort of scientific experimentation on her.
Also, nitpicking here: Why not translate what the German's are singing? It doesn't help us that we don't know why Celestia is shocked at them because we don't understand it.
Is it a hate-song? Is it a nationalism song? What is it?!?!
like people above said, historically incorrect. other then that kinda funny.
You. Motherfucker.
555091 Yes but I plan for the ponies to eventually realize how bad the axis is and for them to start fighting for the allies.
Also if you all want to know the song they are singing please check this link.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YluAK2oJztc
is comrade stalin going to take twilight sparkles for a sports holiday with some old friend of the communist party?(if you undestand this reference your level of awesomeness is over NINETHOUSANDDDDDDDDD)
Wouldn't they attack the Soviets later? The USSR killed more than the Nazis did.
Soyuz nerushimy respublik svobodnykh
Splotila naveki velikaya Rus'!
Da zdravstvuyet sozdanny voley narodov
Yediny, moguchy Sovetsky Soyuz!
Slavsya, Otechestvo nashe svobodnoye
Druzhby narodov nadyozhny oplot!
Partiya Lenina — sila narodnaya
Nas k torzhestvu kommunizma vedyot!
Skvoz' grozy siyalo nam solntse svobody
I Lenin veliky nam put' ozaril
Na pravoye delo on podnyal narody
Na trud i na podvigi nas vdokhnovil!
V pobede bessmertnykh idey kommunizma
My vidim gryadushcheye nashey strany
I krasnomu znameni slavnoy otchizny
My budem vsegda bezzavetno verny!
Slavsya, Otechestvo nashe svobodnoye
Druzhby narodov nadyozhny oplot!
Partiya Lenina — sila narodnaya
Nas k torzhestvu kommunizma vedyot!