To think, of all the powers that came into her possession, she would turn to the Nightmare in order to defeat him, plunging Equestria into the same darkness she once defeated. A Twyrant story.
Dude you really need to pick a tence/pov and stick with it. Your go from descibing something in past tence to first person pov and then back again all in the same sentence. It's to hard to read srry
Dude you really need to pick a tence/pov and stick with it. Your go from descibing something in past tence to first person pov and then back again all in the same sentence. It's to hard to read srry
Unreadable. Fix your tenses.