• Member Since 12th Jul, 2013
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ComatoseVEVO


Just some guy trying to make it in life and write pony words as a passtime, I am currently 25 years old

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DISCLAIMER: THIS STORY IS UNDERGOING A COMPLETE REWRITE, PLANNED CHANGES INCLUDE BUT ARE NOT LIMITED TO; BETTER SPELLING, LESS EXPOSITION, LONGER CHAPTERS. THAT IS ALL.



This is the story of a Chilean survivor of the Conversion Bureaus and his group, follow him as he fights for Earth's freedom and struggles with the problems of being a former Brony. Will he give out and fall to the ponies, leaving his group not only leaderless but defenseless against the Pony threat? Or will he lead them to victory, pushing the ponies back to their forsaken Equestria, and recapture Earth for Mankind ensuring our survival? There's only one way to find out.


Random idea that popped up while reading a TCB story they never say what happened to south america other than it was decimated so I'll stand up for all the proud South Americans. Peace Out
And if you came 'cause you thought it was a Human Element crossover sorry to disappoint you just the pic is from there
Cant add more character tags so....
Princess Cadence, Shining Armor and Solar/Lunar Guards/Soldiers

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Comments ( 4 )

Hello all! as I currently lack an editor any suggestions are greatly apreciated, please keep your criticism constructive! I want to improve my writing and I actually want to finish this forever project of mine!

Hmm I wonder if chrysalis and the changeling hive are with the humans underground base high chance chrysalis mention about love and a random person just say it made from chemicals, still with what reactions when the pony from human side would react to this group then

It'll be more interesting to see how you do Blueblood, will he be evil fully on Celestia's side or make him a spy for Luna.

Interesante, espero que haya algo latino en la historia y tambiƩn espero ver algo de Blueblood.

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