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Double Dare

When Twilight Sparkle inadvertently traps Rainbow Dash in one of her "Daring Do" books, the pegasus will have to face a world of danger, action, and adventure as the assistant to Equestria's most famous pony archeologist, Daring Do. Meanwhile, her Ponyville friends are in a race against time to bring their friend back home safe and sound.

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XiF #1 · Jun 4th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1 ·

This is a nice little story. Dialogue is solid, ponies are in character, and the premise is good. The only thing I have to say is that it seems to suffer from LUS. Keep on writing!