A strange artifact comes into the hand of one Twilight Sparkle. It's devious nature is being revealed in front of her very eyes, and it seems she is the only hope Ponyville has. Her struggle is shown in her letters to her mentor.
Interesting. Been a while since I've read some of your stuff. I like the unique angle, though obviously thus far Twilight's done too good a job resisting...
I was at first sceptic because of how short the capters are. but damn, it is rather well writen. Nice idea to show the slow decent into slutiness of the entire town. Go on.
Heh. Age progression? Pst. You think something as deprived and ugly as this force would CARE about something like that? That it wouldn't appeal to ALL depravities?
Like 4453774 said, I was sceptical of the short chapters, but this was such an interesting read that it didn't need longer chapters. All it needs is more chapters and maybe a pre-reader to spot some of the small errors. Can't wait for more
will we also get Rainbow Dash? anyway, hope to read more asap. cause I really enjoy it so far and cant wait to see celestia who probably is already full blown Molestia
While the story so far is really well developed, I'm excited and anxious as to the future possibilities. Will there be smut? Perhaps forced sex? Does the Pearl appeal to all fetishes or just certain ones? Is the Pearl alive?
So many questions, which I assure is a really good thing from my point of view.
4457271 The pony seems to resemble a familiar unicorn with the taste for rubber transformation and hypnosis as seen in this work by Shennanigma. And as a admirer of both artist (he did my profile pic) and the commissioner of the work, I am very interested if it's you who ordered those comics.
4457301 Not me personally, though I did pay half for one, once. No, my friend paid them, he likes comissioning people. And yes, that is Dream Searcher, the rubber pony Mistress.
4457344 Oh no, she is my creation, born from the deep depths of my mind. Her personality, likes, and fetishes have grown over the many RPs that I did, but here she is now, the finished product: a pony who won't back down until all of Equestria knows the pleasure of obedience and rubber. ... Should really write a story about that.
Damn, this was really good. Can't wait to see where you go with this. The short chapters took some getting used to, but I actually rather like it. Works well, in any case.
4457728 No explicit content, but it still depicts the acts of sex.
ok, what does 'TC, M/C, Corruption' mean? corruption is fairly simple, but what about the rest?
4451145 Transformation and Mind Control respectively.
4451160 ah, thank you for the clarification.
4451680 Anytime. I always try and leave the reader to find out for himself/herself, but with such a divisive theme, I figured a small note can help.
... interesting?
Interesting. Been a while since I've read some of your stuff. I like the unique angle, though obviously thus far Twilight's done too good a job resisting...
I was at first sceptic because of how short the capters are. but damn, it is rather well writen. Nice idea to show the slow decent into slutiness of the entire town. Go on.
interesting, and very well done at that.
is there any before part? or is this the story as we know it so far?
4453952 This story is only seen trough letters. If the letter is not written you will not know what happened before it.
Heh. Age progression? Pst. You think something as deprived and ugly as this force would CARE about something like that? That it wouldn't appeal to ALL depravities?
Like 4453774 said, I was sceptical of the short chapters, but this was such an interesting read that it didn't need longer chapters. All it needs is more chapters and maybe a pre-reader to spot some of the small errors. Can't wait for more
will we also get Rainbow Dash? anyway, hope to read more asap. cause I really enjoy it so far and cant wait to see celestia who probably is already full blown Molestia
*adds to read later* hmmmmm curse you black pearl
4455783 Your answer hides in the group list the story is added to.
Hmmm.. no romance tag, yet Twidash group? Odd, but acceptable if it's for the reason I think it is.
Interesting chapters, and the length, surprisingly, doesn't take anything away.
While the story so far is really well developed, I'm excited and anxious as to the future possibilities. Will there be smut? Perhaps forced sex? Does the Pearl appeal to all fetishes or just certain ones? Is the Pearl alive?
So many questions, which I assure is a really good thing from my point of view.
Latex + mind control = Heaven.
Yes, that is math and everyone knows that math is always right.
Even though it's short, it's good.
4456990 That pony in the picture seems oddly familiar...
4457174 Oh really? From a certain story, perhaps? One I am co-writer of?
4457271 The pony seems to resemble a familiar unicorn with the taste for rubber transformation and hypnosis as seen in this work by Shennanigma. And as a admirer of both artist (he did my profile pic) and the commissioner of the work, I am very interested if it's you who ordered those comics.
4457301 Not me personally, though I did pay half for one, once. No, my friend paid them, he likes comissioning people. And yes, that is Dream Searcher, the rubber pony Mistress.
4457330 Ah I see. Would be odd for someone to choose her as his profile and not be involved in her creation somehow.
4457344 Oh no, she is my creation, born from the deep depths of my mind. Her personality, likes, and fetishes have grown over the many RPs that I did, but here she is now, the finished product: a pony who won't back down until all of Equestria knows the pleasure of obedience and rubber. ... Should really write a story about that.
4457360 So what you are implying is that you inspired your friend to "buy" her gifts. That is very much fit for a lovable villain.
one question, before i start: how can a story be rated teen but be in a clopfic group?
I SO LOVE THIS!!!
Damn, this was really good. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
The short chapters took some getting used to, but I actually rather like it. Works well, in any case.
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No explicit content, but it still depicts the acts of sex.
Spike and I*
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You correct the grammar but completely miss the spelling!
(p.s. it's meant to be spelled acres. )