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Well, Mr. Doctor Pony

Applejack sits down with the doctor and tells him the story of how she lost her sanity.

Thanks to MLP Vector club for the Applejack and background I used in the cover art!

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Didlsbrony4evah

Didlsbrony4evah #1 · May 25th, 2014 · · ·

I haven't read the comic series yet, but this piques my interest into it ever further.

DarthSylar12

DarthSylar12 #2 · May 26th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Very good, especially for a first fanfiction. I love the concept and I feel you pulled it off very nice, especially that twist. I applaud you on having a very well written Applejack. Apple horse being my favorite pony it makes me smile to see someone get her character and thoughts so very right. I will say give it a read one more time for spelling or punctuation problems. Beyond that a good read and welcome to the world of fanfiction.

Screw

Screw #3 · May 26th, 2014 · · ·

The choice of storytelling is uncommon, but interesting nevertheless. The flow was smooth. The way you've portrayed Applejack's 'conversation' seems clear to some level. The ending... to me it wasn't clear. What was exactly happening at the end? Did Applejack picture herself talking? Or was she starting to lose her memory?

Batbrony

Batbrony #4 · May 29th, 2014 · · ·

Very well written, quite a dark story indeed. I'm a little confused by the Comedy tag, since I wasn't quite sure what was supposed to be funny about this, but other than that I have no complaints, aside from the fact that there's not more installments coming to this story.

Derpmind