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The sequel to League of Discord. Twilight Sparkle and her friends have successfully returned the six champions to Runeterra, but find themselves dragged along with them. They must now find a way home, despite having no help from an apathetic League, and having yet another pair of ambitious and sinister eyes watching their every move.
"I know yordles might have a slight reputation for being inclined toward eccentricity, but he’s past eccentric and on to full blown ‘I’m so crazy that I can foil my own plans to take over the world despite actually being capable of leveling a city."
My favorite line of the past year
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Great work my friend
It's probably gonna disappoint a few, but I feel like I have to say it. Since there's 90 champions now, there's no way I'm going to be able to get everyone's favorite champ in. In the first story, I had six champions, the mane 6, and the princesses to deal with, and I felt like I barely did any of them justice because of how much I had to split my focus. This time around, I'm gonna try and take things a little slower, limit the amount of characters who are central to the plot, and give every character the focus needed to make them actual characters. To be honest, I feel like I really screwed up my portrayal of Ezreal and Ryze both by not giving either of them enough development in the first story, and that's a mistake I hope to learn from. I'll pretty much say point blank that as far as major characters go, everyone who is going to play a role has already been mentioned. Other champs might get cameos and such, though.
Sonic Rainboom ultimate: global effect which causes all champions to earn their cutie mark.
Oh man, I think it's inevitable that the mane 6 are gonna have to gain support for their return home. Just imagine: people of valoran start to gain interest, and then 'fans' of the mane 6 will be dubbed as 'bronies.'
Of course, there's the milestone of them overcoming with the violence in League matches. But I can see it now:
Applejack - Seeing that she sparred with Lee Sin, probably a solo top bruiser/tanky type (Irelia, Garen, maybe full tank like Shen or Rammus)
Twilight - Obvious AP carry (leaning towards Leblanc/Ahri/Lux; squishy but does da damages)
Rainbow - With training with Riven, probably solo top/jungler bruiser (thinking Nocturne, Lee Sin, Shyvana)
Rarity - May be support, possible viable solo mid (Lulu, Janna, Soraka)
Fluttershy - Support? (lolidunno)
Pinkie - No idea. AD carry where she throws cupcakes? I kinda wanna see Pinkie with Shaco capabilities, though...
We do need a ranged AD carry. All I can see is Rarity by flinging her gems. Or maybe Fluttershy toughens up and takes to a bow. Then again, seeing as there are 6 of them, I think Fluttershy would be most likely to be the one to volunteer to sit out matches. Or maybe Pinkie somehow modifies her Party Cannon (oh man, Graves-style Pinkie would be inviting, too).
well for the matter of ranged AD then rarity would probably be it.
people often assume that one of raritys hobbies is arrow practice. using her magic as a bow.
on the matter of fluttershy. i picture her as a full blown support (think soraka+sona). then she has a passive pet or some shit that does her damage and tanks for her (like a passive tibbers minus the dramatic entrance)
im hopping that twilight, rainbow, and applejack have to join the league to get them out (im bored so im jsut assuming if they did twi would be a mage who focused armor on protection rather than ability enhance rainbow being like ryze and applejack being a like holy crap i forgot his name err dangit hes the one i play all the time well hes the first demncia character) INGORE MY TYPOS
YES! YOU SEMI DID WHAT I ASKED WHEN I STARTED TO READ A FEW HOURS AGO EXCEPT YOU DIDN'T PUT APPLE JACK IN THERE BUT I'M FINE WITH THAT! BEWARE TWILIGHT'S ABOUT TO
im happy now but please remember twilight is a the reincarnation/representation/reinbodyment/ect of magic (sorry i forgot how to spell re-embodiment)
so she wont need magical robes A grand chapter my friend!
I enjoyed the Heimerdinger referece, and i suspect the yordles at the Science lab were Rumble and possibly Ziggs.
REALLY looking forward to seeing Rainbow and/or Twilight in a league match! I wanna see some pony humans kick some ass!
OOOOO, and side thought. Do you think they would be suprised by Hecarim? The closest champion to what they once weere physcially but the farthest possible in mentality and morality.
Looking forward to more!
Well, remember that Rumble hates Heimer, with that being his entire reason for joining the league, while Ziggs doesn't really have much connection to any of the other yordles.of the league. Heimer does, however, have lots of contacts in the bandle city and piltover hextech scientific community.
Well, I like the little cameos, because I know, plot aside, one of my favorite parts of a crossover are those little 'oh, THAT character showed up? He's my favorite! Awesome!' moments. That being said, I spend a lot of time on the official website and the unofficial wiki to make sure I don't derp my canon, a la 'Brand is a nice guy at heart' or 'Rammus and Twitch get along'. Little stuff like that matters, imo. I'd like to think of it as a quality mark when I get as much of that stuff right as possible.
“-and then the unicorn doctors pumped my stomach again!” Pinkie finished, completely unaware that she was being ignored.
the again part scares me
But anyways I have never played LoL (I think Thats what this is based on) but I seem to have gained interest in your story
Good work
Ghosted Note, do you study psychology or something? This whole Twilight-Swain conflict is pure gold. Your story is already one of the best pony fics (not the best, sorry, you lose to "Anthropology" :D ), but I'm starting to think there couldn't be a better LoL fan fiction, ever.
Ask somebody, maybe even John Jojesco, for some epic image for tumbnail.
Nope, though I've read a few books here and there. As for an image, it just always seemed rather presumptuous to just say 'hey, artist, can you make this for me for free?' Ehh, it just rubs me the wrong way. I do read Anthropology, but as of late my interest in the story has been kinda waning. EDIT: My interest in that story was waning, till the latest chapter, that is.
>>584958 Thats cool someone else saw that too, and yea them running into Hecarim would be awsome.
I love everything about this story, especially Swains entirety, you just did him(along with everyone, come to think of it) so well. And as usually can't wait till the next update.
comically over-sized sword...
So... there's 4 of them fighting? I thought Fluttershy would find herself in a perfect place as a 0-cs-meta support, summoning wild animals to help her :D Or Rarity, as gems are truly, truly outrageous...
Anyway, good job. Nice to see you catching up with the updates of the League, especially Journal of Justice, as the last issue confirms Swain becoming Grand General.
that explains how cassiopeia is able to wear boots
i cant wait for them to meet all of the fun champions like nocturne, fiddlesticks, urgot, brand, karthus, evelynn, nautilus, hecarim ... wait... hecarim
suffering is magic, another blue ribbon for hecarim...
DO IT FAGGOT!!!! DO! IT!
also, fluttershy must befriend maokai. you know why.
i also think that orianna deserves someone to talk to. she is so alone (this is canon, read her lore)
Shit is about to get real!!!!!!! I am so excited
I love your explanations for things within the league universe, and I applaud you for keeping up to date on the lore/gameplay as well. Great job my friend.
It's always great to have an author who writes works consistant with their inspirations.
I'm imagining Swain in the Nightmare Regalia (nice name btw) looking like Tyrant Swain, is that close?
and REALLY excited to see who Nasus has on his team and who he's facing.
Heres hoping for friendly Galio
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Looking forward to the confrontation!
Another great chapter my friend, a very nice fight scene and so many champion references (and i just knew you'd include Draven
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The weapon choices for each of the girls was fantastic as expected, and i'm personally hoping for a batttle between Hecarim and Rainbow Dash; A battle of the speed demons as it were. And very ominous forshadowing with the dark Celestia.
With the quality of this story I'm thoroughly suprised that these chapters don't get more comments.
And "He beat me to death with his staff. With all of the armor Ah had on, it took a very, very long time,”, while not good for Applejack
is my current favorite quote
. It's just hilarious in context. And I have to wonder how much their respective deaths hurt.
As always can't wait for more, and hoping for a Galio cameo
Pinkie needs to train with Shaco! Think of the mayhem! She can already pop out of containers far too small to contain her body that nopony ever saw her get into in the first place, twitches that can predict ganks, and the ability to teleport faster than RD can fly. She would be a BAWS in the jungle. Give her some explosive cupcakes, or hell even just some butcher knives, and she'll be set.
....or you could go all "Cupcakes" on us and give her a chainsaw instead.....I can already picture it: A small box suddenly appears in the middle of one of the lanes. The champions just look at it, confused for a bit once they notice nothing happen. Suddenly Pinkie jumps out with her trusty chainsaw, and with an eerily gleeful shout of, "SURPRISE!!" proceeds to dismember the thoroughly horrified champions in front of her.
That aside, yet another fine chapter. I can't WAIT to see their first match. they're gonna get destroyed I bet 
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And for cameos, I vote Sona. Rarity needs to meet her. There's no reason a fashonista and a homicidal classical musician can't get along 
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This story is pretty amazing 
That being said, you may want to have someone look over this and the previous story for some of the redundant sentences. Honestly, I don't feel like pulling an example now, but I've noticed a few times when you say the same thing twice in the same sentence. It's a major drawback. I would look for an example, but it's late, and I'm tired 
I want Twilight to have some training with other mages.
Like Karthus.
I'm sure she'll be fine.
Physically.
Fluttershy needs to train with Sona.
Applejack.....Nasus is great, but y not malphite?
Pinkie and Shaco. That is all. Perhaps a bit of creepy as nocturne as well.
Dash; Perhaps Kayle? She ain't a fighter per se, but she has wings.
Rarity? I say Vayne; she just fits Demonhunter in my opinion.
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