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...... THIS IS THE GREATEST STORY EVER!
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Thanks. I was getting a LITTLE nervous that Dash's plan was a bit TOO weird
Wow... didn't expect them to use that to escape. Lol nice chapter, though. Can we see more of a relationship form between Dash and Twilight? If not, then I don't mind. Just keep writing enticing, action-packed chapters that keep me wanting to read more and I'll be satisfied!
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The action scenes WILL get longer. I'm just giving a "Taste of things to come" type thing in the first few chapters.
ok man this seems to be just freaking EPIC
That ending... Now THAT is Saints Row! The only thing more Saints Row would be if Dash had used a fart in a jar to suffocate Midnight!
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HA! That is funny but I have a thing against fart jokes
>> Pinkamena666
Sounds awesome! Can't wait to see where everything goes! I literally wake up and get excited about reading the next chapter when its out! Keep up the amazing work!
Okay, first I'll go with nit-picking at this sentence's lack of Twilight:
Beyond that, I'm pleasantly shocked that this was the first application of unorthodox weaponry. Granted, I'm fine if the combat is centered around gun-play and brawling, but I'm hoping for this type of ingenuity (or absurdity) to continue throughout the story.
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Yeah, Twi was supposed to have bit her lip. Thanks for pointing that out...
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How the hell did I miss that?
I read that part many times
4456870 Because Dash's ego is large enough to make sex with her cloned self seem believable.
All joking aside, I only noticed that mistake because I couldn't recall the transition between Dash conceiving the idea and putting it into action.
WELL THAT WAS HILARIOUS.
No big errors. A few things that could be done to clean up the fights and make them seem more real, but no big deal. No tyops that I noticed, and no other errors either.
I was expecting sex in a car... I just wasn't expecting female cum used as a weapon.
Oh how the mind works.
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Hence Midnight's line of "Well played, Dash. Well played."
WHICH
Is inspired by Discord's line in "Keep Calm And Flutter On" when he goes "Well played, Fluttershy. Well Played..."
that's all there is to say
Oh how the cliche was killed by the humor of that weapon
that happened Twilight killed Shining Armor, and they used cum as a weapon"
well shit son
That's just keep getting better and better, so far it feels more like a Saint's Row crossover :D
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Well, what is GTA but Saints Row without a story?
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Huh, and I foolishly thought it was the other way around
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Saints Row has that awesome "Save the hood" type of story and game progression where GTA is basic heists. No real imagination there. I love GTA5 but the only thing going for it is the well-done control scheme and GTA Online.
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Still, GTA IV had a pretty solid story line, if you ask me. Saint's, for me, was about the fun, rather than the story
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How much do I win?
Well, that was probably the stupidest and most contrived explanation for a sex scene I have ever seen.
And now we wait when Shining Finally gets revealed to be part of the gang as either sole male or the VERY scarce male in the gang in it. Also, Cum victory was a nice touch.
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1) I like how you have "Shining being the sole male" an option even though you met the colt at the front desk and the ones in the garage. Silly filly
2) Also, I'll probably have Shining be the mission director / mechanic
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Well, Since they are rescuing Celestia and most of the mane six, 3/6 are in the gang with Cadence as the leader, then Shining as Mission Director / Mechanic won't be that problematic to be realized. Know my vote goes to Mission Director.
This is both really funny, and still a better love story then twilight
>cum
>weapon
This story is AUTOMATICALLY the best.
Going into this story, I'm not sure what I was expecting. It wasn't this... But it's still fucking awesome.
all I got to say is: DAMN, EPIC STORY , I came looking for a story with Saint Row or GTA, and I find one with a bit of both , hope to see more
I love it so much, such epic skills in writing you have. make moar chapters.:flutterrage. you my good sir can have a
Awesome story. When's the next chapter gonna be released?
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Supposed to be daily but I guess I missed a day or two. Oh, snap. Guess I got some writing to do...
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Cum Weapon?
I LOVE THIS, LOVE IT MORE THAN ANY STORY EVER.
Sorry... My outburst must of shocked you... But what shocked me most was the Molotov Cumtail. Nice one Pinkamena!
4472667 I suspect that was a weapon idea pitched for the saints row games that never got approved.
*Reads chapter*
I'm faving this shit.
Oh dear god I think that was the weirdest thing I've ever read on this site, or anywhere else for that matter. Good job Pinkamena!
well, isn't that how you stop someone from shooting you. *facepalms* That's just terribly funny!
Totally see the Saint Rows Vibe in this. FUCKING LOVE IT
im gonna guess that when twilight is foully in the gang she is going to get her penis when she meets with the leader celestia or whatever why because iv seen season 4 of the actual show that and shes a fricking dominatrix so how dare you tease us with the penis twilight so soon yet i can't help but admire your work iv gotta say i look forward to seeing how this plays out
That victory method earned you a like my good sir.
This video immediately came to mind.
middle and ring finger? odd combination, usually it's middle and pointing finger..
7371574 nah the middle & ring that way you can cup and squeeze the lips while rubbing the palm over the clit
"Just go back to fingering yourself..."
She still rubbing one out?!
*Eating some bread*
"Eat cum, bitch!"
*shoves bread in to stop laughing*
So basically, Dash used a fem cum version of Jarate/Mad Milk?