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I'm surprised there are no comments.... This story is GREAT!
Please continue! :D
I quite like where the Story is going so far. Its interesting how your keeping the original story intact
4468987 Thank u very much.
The idea is to stay true to the story on a certain level while allowing the additional characters a share of the spotlight, along with some Xtra twists & turns and unexpected surprises
4468971 Thnx for th support
Oh! The Trixie event! This should be good!
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*Gets up on the stage and unzips pants*
"Anything I can do, you can do better, huh? Let's see you pee accurately at a target while standing up, mare!"
I apologize, but I couldn't freaking resist! I was gonna say something worse, but then I checked the rating and discovered that the original comment was too far above the rating.
Oh boy. You know what THAT means, right? Someone else will get their hooves on the Alicorn's Amulet, and hopefully it WON'T be Tirek.
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Well, other than a few wrong words here there's nothing really negative to this chapter.
5233367 What was it? The over rating ? XD
Gilda I can see, but I never did like how the show did Trixie's bit. Shes a unicorn who's talent is being a showmare, a job that especially with the travelling kind specifically calls for boasting, and shes in a land where a good two thirds of the main species can defy gravity by using magic in some way.l so shes obviously got to be more agressive and flamboyant since shes a unicorn. Seeing a unicorn levitate someone isnt exactly impressive. Her show was pretty standard, though her actions against the mane six werent exactly professional they were still valid. There were ponies trying to get others to think of her as a fraud which would cut into her income and thus make it hard to make ends meet and so she dealt with them by simultaneously entertaining her audience and removing the neighsayers' credibility temporarily by essentially pulling pranks, of which we all know Pinkie and Dash have done worse. Honestly the only problem ponies were the mane six for being dicks and Snips and Snails for being the epitome of retarded by going into a dangerous forest thats famous for being a chaotic death trap filled with predators, at NIGHT, to hunt down a STAR BEAST AND PISS IT OFF. Even in the town that kills off common sense thats horrendous.
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Very well reasoned
I don’t think that word means what you think it means, T-Bits. Flirting with MC doesn’t exactly make her a mare of the streets.
It’s nice that MC apologized, but he destroyed Trixie’s home. Her life’s investments were in that cart, and he didn’t offer to help replace any of it after complaining to himself about not having a good thing to spend his money on…