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This reminds me of the story I started writing recently.
Could use some work, but it's a good story idea.
-is screaming internally-
4654941 The Cutie Mark looks like the Reclaimer symbol from Halo, which I used as the Cutie Mark on the main character of my first story. Fate is out to get me.
4654941 funny finding you here. only reason im reading this one is because i caught the symbol as well. "hmm...looks like Opacare's..lets give it a shot."
First half reminds me of who I want to be... I wish the second half would happen!
Wow! 124 chapters on this story alone since May? I feel like a slacker now... Just recently posted chapter 14 on mine.
I beleive this story could do a little bit less with the word 'He'.
1 chapter down, 138 to go.
I think you might have switched to first person perspective right there.
I do that to my sister some times
OJ is best drink.
Some confusion of past and present tense, but an interesting start.
If TJ went to Equestria, where did Jade end up? I hope she was not a Twilight fan.
you swapped from third pony to first then back to third pony. fix this please.
I'm so glad I found this story again! I remember reading it in 2014, back when it just first started. This, and two other stories with human themes inspired me to try making my own story. Although mine didn't turn out very good, I'm glad to see this story still going on after all this time.
I'm going to re-read the first 5 chapters to rehash the plot, then continue to read until I catch up. If I really get into this story again (which I totally will,) I'll favorite it to my... Uhh... favorite collection. Keep up the great work and don't give up.
Always like to leave on a positive note.
HUZZAH! A NEW STORY TO BINGE READ! and over 1 Mil words......this is gonna be fun!
Uh... throwing knives? For protection?
Then again, I throw axes at a wooden target for fun.
Re-reading this master piece .
Hace tiempo que no leo uno de estos
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I can relate; my comments come from my chimney.
Before I get invested in this story, Can someone tell me if this is a herding fic?
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Not until MUCH later
Hmm good so far, though I have a feeling hes a bit in shock right now with his lack of reaction to him and his sister dying and him waking up as a pony in equestria, but I know that itll all hit him soon enough
And here is where the story genuinely starts! Lets see if it gets better from here, yeah? So far it's just felt like a setup for 'oh this story is being written by the main character' shite. Which, while always an interesting route to take in the background, is also very much hampering the enjoyment of the story what with it being so... Extended, like this.
interesting so far