Fic for the Writer's Training Ground
Week 15 Theme: Nightmare Night
When Lyra perfects the spell of her dreams, there's nothing stopping her on a night in which everypony looks obscure
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The story? Great! A lyra and bonbon story without the two being lesbians? Excellent! Want more!
Wow, you are so cool, Lyra! Those _hands_ of yours awesomely precize!
18551 They may theoretically be lesbians in this story. It's generally accepted they are, and it's not mentioned that they're not, so they probably are in this story.
A Lyra with hands fic... I'm okay with this.
18563
true, I'm just glad someone made a fic without their supposed relationship being the focus. Not that the relationship exists at all, but i guess that's the fan base we've got.
I must admit, the first thing I thought of when I read about the disproportionate beefiness of Lyra's man-hands was this.
Also, horses have hair, not fur. Minor nitpick, but it's one of my pet peeves.
And here I was paranoid that I was making bad transitions and felt that the concert segment was pointless. Seems it's been well accepted
Then again, I never did point out that I was seeking critique
Oh god. This is so funny and the last line nearly broke me. Bahahaha
18776 I am going to get down on my knees and worship you. You are the first person that I have ever seen say that apart from me. It makes me want to hurt something when people use fur for ponies. it's either hair or a coat.