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Icarus


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Princess Luna, ruler of the night, has spent a thousand years watching the increasingly-corrupt Equestrian nobility hatch their schemes. Sick of their plotting, she secretly gathers a group of ponies to deal with them once and for all.

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Comments ( 29 )

This now resides in my inbox. I will read it first thing when I'm awake enough to read something, promise.

I like it, I LIKE IT!! I can't wait to see how this unfolds. Also, poor Derpy,:derpyderp2: that had to hurt.

"Nothing is true. Everything is muffin."
So very amused right now.

the only question left is who dies first? hoity toity, braeburn, or tiara?

I have no idea how Braeburn, Hoity Toity and Silver Spoon wound up on the character list. My fault, there. Sorry, folks.

Keep going its getting good!

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lol well that's weird :rainbowlaugh: still a good fic tho, will be waiting for next one

«"Nothing-is-true, Every-thing's-per-mit-ted," the first repeated in a childish, singsong voice, bouncing a little on her hooves underneath her candy-pink hood and tabard. Luna suppressed a shudder; she had trained them all in the art of the shadows, but this one scared her.»

This made me fall of my chair laughing.:pinkiehappy:

Everything is muffin. :moustache:

:pinkiecrazy: we are in the presence of Cupcakes' Pinkie Pie and we don't even know it...

Nice follow up! Keep up the good work!

What I wonder is, why does the stories image show a pony with instrument bows coming out of its sleeves? I know they are supposed to be blades, but they look EXACTLY like the bow I use for playing the cello...

Next time, send her on a demolition mission.
Now...Who's next? And I want the hidden blade!

Edit- Why is my text italic?

That was brilliant. I enjoyed Derpy's dialogue and that brief interaction (sorry for a scratch after trying to kill her).

....Special cupcakes, eh?

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It's that stray [i/] near the end of the chapter. That's a typo for the end-italics tag (with i and / switched), so the browser doesn't recognize it as a proper tag, displays it as visible text, and merrily keeps the italics running...and then they "leak" into the rest of the page outside the story proper for some reason. I've seen this before.

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That one slipped me by- fixed now. Sorry about that.

And yes, Derpy was trying to kill First Class, but she wasn't trying to hurt her. Poor confused assassin pony.

want that blade and i want that cupcake

I was hoping there would be a Revelations concept in there. :rainbowlaugh: Explosives. But in cupcakes?! :yay:

Man, I didn't see that coming. When the explosion went off, I was all, ":pinkiegasp:", then I was all ":rainbowhuh:..."

Then I got it. :pinkiecrazy:

Oh god i love this good job keeping it lighthearted :heart:

"Screamingly-Creamy Ice-Cream Creamer 9001"....not as catchy as Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000, but a nice change. Carry on comrade:moustache:

You called a mail pony Penny Black! lolololololololololol :D :eeyup:

I didn't think Flim and Flam were that bad. As I recall, there machine was legit and more efficient than Applejack.

clearly octavia ( the one on the cover art ) is the best one sent for a special mission later

ps RavenSmite thos are chelo bows probluobly with razor whire strings thogh OCTAVIA ALDITOR RULES!!!!

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