So Zecora is cursed? I thought/think she finds rhyming easier to get point across.
I raised her eyes to hers. It was lust - carnal desire so primal and irresistible I just knew I'd be in trouble if I stopped now. Not that I'd want to stop. Luna, consumed by passion, was different than her usual, cute self.
Wow. Hm. First of all, I generally avoid poetry because I'm not a big fan, but this was very tolerable for me. Not to mention funny. I thought the night time spooning was cute~ But I suppose a lot of females consider spooning to be cute. Meh. *shrugs*
But then, suddenly male Zecora is banging the sh*t out of Luna, and her old world Europe speak made me smirk at times. I do truly adore that moment...the half-lidded, smoldering I'm-about-to-get-pounded look. Yeah, Luna you naughty filly you lol But, you killed me...you killed me with this "my mind goes strange places when I'm coming" I totally relate especially when it's really powerful. I've had a moment like that where it was so good, I was scared as the orgasm was approaching like "Am I going to be able to handle this? " I almost passed out. Anyway, good story! Going to the fav's!
I like this too much.
So Zecora is cursed? I thought/think she finds rhyming easier to get point across.
I'm confused.
You mean the vial that she gave to Twilight to drink?
I sense some Pinkie resentment. Love the rhyming though.
.... I'm done
Wow. Hm. First of all, I generally avoid poetry because I'm not a big fan, but this was very tolerable for me. Not to mention funny. I thought the night time spooning was cute~ But I suppose a lot of females consider spooning to be cute. Meh. *shrugs*
But then, suddenly male Zecora is banging the sh*t out of Luna, and her old world Europe speak made me smirk at times. I do truly adore that moment...the half-lidded, smoldering I'm-about-to-get-pounded look. Yeah, Luna you naughty filly you lol
But, you killed me...you killed me with this
"my mind goes strange places when I'm coming"
I totally relate especially when it's really powerful. I've had a moment like that where it was so good, I was scared as the orgasm was approaching like "Am I going to be able to handle this? " I almost passed out. Anyway, good story! Going to the fav's!