Shit just got real, seriously. If I was there, I would have killed them all with Lightning by now. Rainbow would be a hazzle....but I would be able to pull it off.
505594 i'd rather watch a porno if the first hour or so was like a regular action movie and the only to save the chick is to screw her. builds plot, establishes characters and provides good reason for poon.
505636 So enjoy the story none the less yes? Sweet someone apprieciates what Im doing! 505606 To give you some insight of me. I hail from a place called fakku.net were there arre fuck stories and great stories that just so happen to have sex in them. This is inspired by the later, but don't worry even though the next chapter is nowhere near done or started for that matter, there is a HELLA alot more sex coming up in this chapter, and boy is it good. 504339 Also ya got to wait so see what is going to happen because every character has a reason they are doing something. Finally for everyone how do you like the original charcters do they bring some added life to this?
The good ones at least, there are still some out there that go straight for the 'goods' and they can be fun if you want something quick I guess, but the ones I remember are more like this one.
505667 oh shit dude. i feel sorry for the next victim, you ain't gonna stop.
505670 tell me about it. i read sonic the hedgehog fanfiction that was like this when i was a few years younger. i still remember what metal sonic did to sonic's acid-stripped head.
505701>>505779>>505670 So who is your favorite original character (I'll give out extra info on them too)? And for chapter 2 All I can say is prepare to feel conflicted at the end. Man oh man I can't wait to show you guys!
Oh... hard choice. Considering I have had little time to get to know them... lets see. High Roller has a nice charm I like, but not quite favourite material. Checkmate is nifty, but not there for me. Hmm... I want to know more about Sleepyhead. I like her, she seems like a good antagonist, and I kind of like strong women.
i grabbed my dick and double-clicked
this story is for porn.
501678 So you liked the new chapter yes?
502397
yes. although i couldn't rub yet
Shit just got real, seriously.
If I was there, I would have killed them all with Lightning by now.
Rainbow would be a hazzle....but I would be able to pull it off.
503195
Everyone knows that good clop fics have plot. Lots and lots of plot. It makes them much more fun to read.
505237
i know. that's why i can't get hard watching porn anymore. i have to read it
505257
That is what porn needs, better writers. Ones who have reasons why sex is the conclusion of every conversation had between people.
505594
i'd rather watch a porno if the first hour or so was like a regular action movie and the only to save the chick is to screw her.
builds plot, establishes characters and provides good reason for poon.
505606
Glad someone agrees with me. Way better when there is something built into the story.
And that was a mistake, I looked away and thought I hadn't pushed send.
505636
yeah. good thing most porn fic writers enjoy writing stuff like this. it makes me hard and its good for my heart
505636 So enjoy the story none the less yes? Sweet someone apprieciates what Im doing!
505606 To give you some insight of me. I hail from a place called fakku.net were there arre fuck stories and great stories that just so happen to have sex in them. This is inspired by the later, but don't worry even though the next chapter is nowhere near done or started for that matter, there is a HELLA alot more sex coming up in this chapter, and boy is it good.
504339 Also ya got to wait so see what is going to happen because every character has a reason they are doing something. Finally for everyone how do you like the original charcters do they bring some added life to this?
505651
The good ones at least, there are still some out there that go straight for the 'goods' and they can be fun if you want something quick I guess, but the ones I remember are more like this one.
505667
I love it so far. And wait this is just more tease chapter? That is kind of awesome, means lots of stuff is coming. Looking forward to more!
505667
oh shit dude. i feel sorry for the next victim, you ain't gonna stop.
505670
tell me about it. i read sonic the hedgehog fanfiction that was like this when i was a few years younger. i still remember what metal sonic did to sonic's acid-stripped head.
505667: Yes they do bring life.
505701>>505779>>505670 So who is your favorite original character (I'll give out extra info on them too)? And for chapter 2 All I can say is prepare to feel conflicted at the end. Man oh man I can't wait to show you guys!
505865
i ain't gonna pick one they are all fair game for ze mind-raping.
505865
Oh... hard choice. Considering I have had little time to get to know them... lets see. High Roller has a nice charm I like, but not quite favourite material. Checkmate is nifty, but not there for me. Hmm... I want to know more about Sleepyhead. I like her, she seems like a good antagonist, and I kind of like strong women.
505865: I want to see the other OC characters before I make a final decision