Hi my name is Scootaloo and I live with the most awesome mare in all of equestria.
her name is Rainbow Dash she live in a floating house at the edge of Ponyvile a little village close to Canterlot.
I've lived with her since she found out is was an orphan when she saw me sleeping on the street after that she took me in and everything changed.
I got a place to live, a loving mother if a little reckless at times, flying lessons that haven't really helped me much since my wings aren't fully grown yet.
So this is where my story starts in a little floating cloud house in a small room with a bed under a blanket in the morning with a closed door that opened.
"Scootaloo... hello wakey wakey... WAKE UP!" Yelled a familiar voice at the little filly.
she had to wake up soon to get ready for her firs year of school.
"Wha... Whats wrong Rainbow." Said Scootaloo still a little drowse.
"School is starting today." Said rainbow Rather annoyed.
"What well why didn't you tell me!" said Scootaloo a little worried.
It was already known to rainbow that Scootaloo was a little nervous about going to school on the first day.
Rainbow told her that everything will turn out fine and that she just had to stay calm but she only seemed to get more panicked after that.
rainbow also told her about meeting new friend and getting to know other ponies.
Good for the first chapter a bit hard to read but still I like it
Just to say, before I read the actual chapter.
I want to say, you are an inspiration! You have certain things holding you back, but you don't let them get to you! You are a huge inspiration, and i can tell you're a fighter. I can tell. Good luck in the future, and have a Nonsesical, Paradoxical and Extraordinary day!
-Pinkie13Pie
It's a great start! Also, to help with the grammar hiccups, you can ask for someone to proofread. Everyone on here is super nice and I'm sure some would like to lend a hoof in helping! :) Check some of the communities for people. Just ask nicely and they will help you!
Hi there. I have similar difficulties to you. Whilst I will admit that this isn't the easiest of stories to read at times, i'ts the fact that you have clearly tried and done the best you can that counts. May many more years of writing be ahead of you.