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Really?
Off the top of my head, they've also fought Nightmare Moon, Discord, Sombra, a manticore, a dragon, an ursa minor, a cockatrice, diamond dogs, parasprites, a hydra, and a timberwolf. Sure, some of those "fights" were of the "run away as fast as possible" or "blast it with the elements" varieties, but some were legitimate fights too.
And I was going to put my money on Fae's sickness coming from a recent lack of orgasms.
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beyond as in chronologically
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Ahh, okay. I guess that just leaves Sombra (which I admit wasn't much of a fight) and the timberwolves.
Something else just occurred to me. Haven't you established that changelings can only turn into a pony they can see or something like that? So how does that brothel work? Does the changeling go sneak around and find the pony the customer wants, change, and then sneak back or something? That seems more than a little inconvenient. Or do the changelings not take requests?
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The brothel will be revealed in a future chapter
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing how the meeting with Twilight's parent's go's.
So many wrong or misplaced words.
And. I. Don't. Care.
This is hillarious.
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Well yeah, this has 0 editing done to it.
Awww! Still no eggs? Some queen she is.
This fic man. This fic.
YES!
4456243 0 Editing? That's what I like! I love grammar mistakes (unless it's intentional)!
... I literally just became happy Markiplier. Do I really like the meet twilights parents bit so much that I become happy Markiplier?
power creeps a real bitch.
I wonder what the hell her sickness is?
Ahh, the thing about pirates is that once you get past the democratic hierarchy, they were assholes.
I feel kind of sorry for Hoofbeard here, in the comics he was looking for his lost love, a meremare named Jewel, and the Mane Six help him. Guess in this world he doesn't get to find her.
We're willing to bet the sickness is her rather large distance from the rest of the hive without drone support.
Chapter 3
I say Fae is either poisoned or pregnant.
+ Why doesn't he just check the hive mind, "what's wrong with me?"
I have said it to often already, so I'm probably going to stop doing it the next time, but while I see this as a normal couple thing, I don't like it that it makes her look like she or them really need it so bad all the time.
You could say I feel like this is a bit overdone.
I know it sometimes look like I would overreact, but I figured out that I really don't mind the sex and them talking about it is one of the most harmless stuff that happened on this side that I know so far, but Fae and Twilight look like they would be so badly focused on sex, that he/she even thought Rarity was giving him a blowjob.
I mean I hope she isn't that much of a slut that she is that kind of Mare that helps every old Stallion with his. needs and that it was only the clothe stuff I saw there.
1. I admit I only don't like my main chars to look like sluts or something like that
2. Sometimes I think it is just enough, like in a story where it felt like they where having sex three times a chapter/day with nearly no story beside it.
Sorry my long talks probably make me look like I have a bigger problem than I actually have, but I'm just used to authors missunderstanding my comments that I keep explaining it. He is really to focused on the sexual stuff.
Corrections offered without malice.
easy,
straight
straight
had another think coming
One Piece
gentlecolt.”
shell and spill
confidence
remove
formerly
barely had enough
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Or she start to morph into a queen. Many storys have a Changeling change into a queen when no hivemind or queen on top of her was...
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Sounds about right...
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Maybe morph from a Princess to queen?
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That one hell of a fun to get your partners needs fullfilled
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I think its perfect. Since many mare have no stallion they can have it at least tend after...
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Damn good question... Maybe if the change to there pony version and change gender? Or one stays transformed and others copy it on demand
Oh yes, time to meet the parents
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Pure Nightmare stuff
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Forget Chrysalis, this is an ever worse horror
Dread, run from it, destiny still arrives