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Ok, first of all, pineapples don't grow on your traditional trees. They look like this:
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It takes forever to grow a fruit like that, you get maybe two in a year from a single plant, so if this is a moderately popular beach all the ripe ones will probably have already been picked.
Secondly, they're only mildly salt tolerant, which means you can't have them growing directly adjacent to the beach where they're constantly buffered with salt spray. They will die. They can be near the beach, but not directly on the beach.
Finally, I swore you almost got close to the joke about the pineapple and the yo-yo.
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The beginning of the adventure is from the MLP comics where pineapples do grow on trees instead of coconuts. (and get ponies drunk, but I'm caving to the fandom of cider for that one).
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Comics...
Good sequel so far, but I really want a story with a little more direction. You've got the right pieces with DADA coming up, although slice of life is also very good.
Keep up the good work, and don't feel the need to change any of your plans. This is just my opinion.
Awesome story. Just as great as the first one. Will Fae go through more MLP episodes? I'm curious what you would do with the season 4 finale.
4358912 Wow thanks farmer Joe! ;)
You made this whole chapter just to reference one peice didn't you... The whole chapter felt like it was one peice and it was nostalgic. Nice work.
sooo fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/082/d/4/holy_crab__by_raikoh_illust-d5z128g.jpg
A little error right there that I don't know how you will fix.
Capitalize the a in and, add a the after and you should be good to go there.
Change the hear to here.
Setting sail.
I think you meant a pirate pony.
Did you mean my body?
Chasing.
I didn't see anything else.
In case you feel bad about the errors, which you might not and just think I being condescending, don't be. You made 9 words wrong or mixed up in a chapter 12000 words long.
Other than that I really like you story and can't wait to catch up.
We are going to have Rarity fight a giant crab again, aren't we?
So what you're saying is that it's a giant enemy crab?
4636563 You've probably already realized this, but in case you haven't, I'll point it out. This was basically the MLP comics retold with an additional character (So far as I know. I only ever saw the one page of it my friend showed me with Luffy, Zoro and Sanji in it). So this isn't an original chapter.
Giant Enemy Crab! HIT WEAK POINT FOR MASSIVE DAMAGE!
yes, that's a good place to go if sea sick, but that's usually done at night or low visibility, the best place is near midships and as close to the water line as possible, outside so you can focus on a spot on the horizon. at least that's what i was told in the navy, i'm one of the lucky few that doesn't get seasick
you're right, captain of the ship isn't dictator, he's god of the ship.
"Hadn't of" is never a thing. "Hadn't've," however, is.
Ok, so this is really confusing. There are parts that make me sure this is a hallucination or something akin to it, but then something else goes and happens that makes me sure it's all real, which makes the aforementioned part make no sense, then something else happen that returns me to being sure it's a hallucination, then something else happens...
Well, you get the idea. I'm extremely confused, fluctuating between being sure this is real, to being sure it's a hallucination.
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Broken image.
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Actually, you're wrong; hadn't've is completely wrong. First of all, that's not how apostrophes work. Secondly, it makes no sense when expanded; had not have.
she just needs to stop using transmogrification spells thats her problem, i mean seriously last time she turned ponies into defenseless kids who then got eatem by pirahanas, just learn some safe combat magic
Thank you. I would have been highly disappointed with this chapter if you hadn't put in at least a mention of them.
So, a pirate walks up to him and starts talking dirty, then Fae kills him outright even though the pirate probably only did so because he was affected by Fae's weird pheromones, and none of the M6 have any issues with this. Sorry, but not good enough.
Yeah. Twilight definitely needs more training and discipline.
And nobody mentions the reference to Pirates of Dark Water?
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Erm, since when asking questions is not an option? This idiocy could by easily avoided by asking mr. pirate what exactly pirating in Equestria means to either highlight the obvious issues or find out that there are none serious.
Very deep chapter Thanks for this experience Your story is amazing
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Well she is a very young alicorn...
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Well... If you payed closer attention you noticed he isnt quite dead... But there will probably be permanent damage... I see your point
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Amazing picture
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This is going to be... Interessting
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You made a amazing chapter and im slightly surprised it didnt reached 5 digit likes by now Well done
Cause their your friends, teasing you about your relationship is part of the deal
Do you even know what an actual pirate does, and don't you already have dreams you want to fulfill?
You mean attacking people, stealing from them and sinking their ships with the people still on it so that they die from either the heat, dehydration, exhaustion, get eaten, or possibly combination of all four?
Yeah, except this "captain" probably dosen't know how
When she thought you died, you should probably have her talk to a professional about this
Didnt remember RD to be so well developed. Great read!
he did not just kill someone or steal 60 years of a persons life just because he was a perv right? right?!
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It has been shown multiple times that anyone that are not the main casts were expandable.
I can see this Twilight now: the Mane Six and the captain completely unable to get any sleep and utterly uncomfortable while Twilight’s shouting a few bunks over in the Royal Canterlot Voice, “Dig for me treasure! Faster! Ah ye~s pirate secks! Pi~ra~te se~cks!!”