Quite a few mistakes but still interesting. I'm not bullying when saying that as I quite a bad writer like I had before. Loads of spelling mistakes happen to me a lot.
4451169 It could never happen. The bible says that god created mankind at the beginning of the world but science says that dinosaurs were around before humans so how is it possible.
4451188 god created animals too and the bible says that first it was Adam and eve then animals but with my love for science and god I belive that god made the dinosaurs then Adam and eve even is science says that we descended from monkeys but until I see a monkey turn into a human then I find it hard to belive
4451306 I actually believe that we came from monkeys. It's call evolution. Everything came from small creatures, very small living in the waters. They grew into fish like things then came onto land making the dinosaurs while some stayed under water. Slowly creatures evolved into other creatures making what we have today.
4451486 'Sign' okay I believe in science because I love science and want to be a vet in the future. I'm in the top three of my class because I love it that much.
4451498 I also love science I'm passing with flying colors and probably one of the best in my class. However my science skills will go to waste because I wanna work more in the pro forming arts category
4451533 Hm, I like preforming arts, they are one of my bests. I'm good at drawing, playing the piano and preforming but I hardly preform as I have some issues with others
4451610 I love to draw but give me a pencil and paper it looks awful but give me a computer it'll turn out fine. I also like to sing I even write me own songs. Plus I'm a good writter I get better everyday. I was Also in my school's play of 12th night by Shakespeare. I only had one line and I was so nervouse I speed throw it. I was also in grease but I was one of the people in the back ground who sing and dance.
4451637 I couldn't do a play in my life no matter what you paid me. I have quite bad stage fright you see, I was able to sing at my leavers assembly in year 6 but that was hard enough. I sang with my best friend and we agreed to us having a solo each. I sang the first part of the first verse, she did the second. It was hard and my mom was literally in tears that I did it. My little brother didn't get to see me, he was in class so never fully believed that I did it.
4451650 you know I never really of into pretty cure but I'll give your story a read. And I might make a mermaid melody mlp story on here or just a random mermaid melody fanfic on wattpad.
4457323 Oh yeah. I like Shugo Chara. My favorite characters from it are Amu and Rikka. Amu because she's the mane character and a shy girl kinda like me. Rikka because she's very funny watching her fall and trip but is very cute and determined.
Quite a few mistakes but still interesting. I'm not bullying when saying that as I quite a bad writer like I had before. Loads of spelling mistakes happen to me a lot.
4403953 sorry I finished the chapter from my I pad so I didn't get a chance to do spell cheek on google docs
4404306 Okay it doesn't matter much to me but other may point it out if they read it and I'm making a version of sailor moon using OC's based on them
4404311 cool I'll try to read it when your done
4404362 Cool I'm waiting for the modorations to take it in and place it on the site but it's been about an hour already....
4404410 Well there probably busy with accepting other stories they'll get to yours eventually. It usually takes about a day.
4404423 I just got it and I hadn't put the cross-over tag silly me...
4404608
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4411088 By the way when's the next chapter?
4446703 well I'm trying to get this other story plublished at the moment
4448251 Oh take you time then.
4449362 thanks and I really need the time because it failed moderation 3 times
4450037 That gets harsh.
4450219 yea but now it finally passed!
4450997 I saw. It's not really the type of story that I would read though.
4451000 that's okay religion isn't for every one
4451152 I hate religion.
4451158 oh wow...why?
4451169 It could never happen. The bible says that god created mankind at the beginning of the world but science says that dinosaurs were around before humans so how is it possible.
4451188 god created animals too and the bible says that first it was Adam and eve then animals but with my love for science and god I belive that god made the dinosaurs then Adam and eve even is science says that we descended from monkeys but until I see a monkey turn into a human then I find it hard to belive
4451306 I actually believe that we came from monkeys. It's call evolution. Everything came from small creatures, very small living in the waters. They grew into fish like things then came onto land making the dinosaurs while some stayed under water. Slowly creatures evolved into other creatures making what we have today.
4451317 eh...it sounds kind of bogus to me but hey belive in what you want
4451486 'Sign' okay I believe in science because I love science and want to be a vet in the future. I'm in the top three of my class because I love it that much.
4451498 I also love science I'm passing with flying colors and probably one of the best in my class. However my science skills will go to waste because I wanna work more in the pro forming arts category
4451533 Hm, I like preforming arts, they are one of my bests. I'm good at drawing, playing the piano and preforming but I hardly preform as I have some issues with others
4451610 I love to draw but give me a pencil and paper it looks awful but give me a computer it'll turn out fine. I also like to sing I even write me own songs. Plus I'm a good writter I get better everyday. I was Also in my school's play of 12th night by Shakespeare. I only had one line and I was so nervouse I speed throw it. I was also in grease but I was one of the people in the back ground who sing and dance.
4451637 I couldn't do a play in my life no matter what you paid me. I have quite bad stage fright you see, I was able to sing at my leavers assembly in year 6 but that was hard enough. I sang with my best friend and we agreed to us having a solo each. I sang the first part of the first verse, she did the second. It was hard and my mom was literally in tears that I did it. My little brother didn't get to see me, he was in class so never fully believed that I did it.
Also I uploaded a new story, about pretty cure.
4451650 you know I never really of into pretty cure but I'll give your story a read. And I might make a mermaid melody mlp story on here or just a random mermaid melody fanfic on wattpad.
4451767 I'm not very interested in Mermaid Melody but have watched a few episodes.
4451771 I love that show (mainly because it's a musical)
4455061 Oh..I might check it out again at some point but I prefer Pretty Cure, Madoka Magica and Sailor Moon more then anything else.
4456152 I love Shugo Chara, Inuyasha, Clannad,and Mermaid Melody more than anything.
4457323 Oh yeah. I like Shugo Chara. My favorite characters from it are Amu and Rikka. Amu because she's the mane character and a shy girl kinda like me. Rikka because she's very funny watching her fall and trip but is very cute and determined.
4457353 I love Amu, because she's awesome. and Nadesko because she just seems so calm until she character transforms.
4457405 You do know that Nadeshiko is a male right?
4457651 yea but that's only when she/he is naghiko i like him too
4457840 I guess... I not watched every episode so I don't fully get it but I know the baseline.
4457859 I see wel I should probably get to work on chapter 5
4461924 It's no rush but it would be nice.