4343265 Your welcome and frankly just to mention I'm a horrible writer and have trouble noticing the problems with my writing but can see it in others. Strange huh?
4343303 from the description they all sound interesting and none interesting at the same time. My recommendation for you is be a little more descriptive in the description but not too much to give the story away and not to little to bore people into not reading it.
I like it. Very good but one thing you spelled the second piece wrong.
4343154 Thanks for the feedback
4343265 Your welcome and frankly just to mention I'm a horrible writer and have trouble noticing the problems with my writing but can see it in others. Strange huh?
4343268 Yea I know what you mean
If you wanna you can go through my stories and look at them..don't give me very harsh comments but try and help me a bit.
4343293 sure I'll do it now
>4343300 Okay
4343303 from the description they all sound interesting and none interesting at the same time. My recommendation for you is be a little more descriptive in the description but not too much to give the story away and not to little to bore people into not reading it.
4343328 I'm kinda bad at that one...it's either bad or gives it away. I can't do it perfectly.
4343339 that's okay you'll get used to it