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I loved reading this... And I do think I've seen a few of those names some where in the books... But not for that chapter, but none the less, good job!
Hmm. Interesting. And the ponies are anthro right?
No, although it would make the story a little easier... in some aspects, for now the ponies are just regular ponies.
4325945 so, just to clear things up for the rest of us... Just the four guys in dark angle tech are anthro... Right? Or are they just pony-esk in their appearances?
Either way it will prove interesting to see anthro ponies interact with regular ones... Don't ya think?
4333393 It's anthro ponies interacting with regular ones, the dark angels are anthro
4333969 Kk, awesome, thanks for clearing that up :D
4340522 You're welcome, and the funniest part... BACON! cuz my friends and I LOVE bacon.
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Please keep writing, I have fallen in love with this story........
Is this the story I inspired you to write? :P
First thoughts on the first chapter? Lemme just start by saying I love the different take that you did. Instead of the same old 'cosplay, picks up item from merchant, goes to equestria and vanquished by the elements of harmony' deal that so many others go through, your characters actually make it through the con with no issues whatsoever and it's only after they leave that things go wrong. Not to mention that you do explain how they got there via a spell but also keep away from having them turned to stone in the first place. Those are major points in my book(and you already know that I tried my own take on it as you have read my story). As for the rest of the chapter there's not much to say but you can rest assured that I will definitely be reading through what you have.
you know that space marine voice from dawn of war? i read their line in that voice.
Long as you don't turn blessed 40k into a mockery i like dis
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When the Angry Marines are technically cannon there is no bigger mockery.