• Member Since 25th Apr, 2014
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StarryDay


We are a brother and sister who have formed a joint account for our (kingfish and Ponyplay15) co-written stories.

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After being experimented on for far too long, Subject #7 must escape his confinement and go on a quest of self-discovery. After his escape, he runs into a certain yellow pegasus, and begins to learn more about his past. NOTE: This fanfiction contains romance between Fluttershy and an OC. If you are a fan of FlutterMac, FlutterDash, or any non-OC Fluttershy shipping, reader discretion may be advised. If you dislike the story, let us know why to help us improve.

This story is transferred from another account. We transferred it because it was written by both a brother (kingfish) and sister (Ponyplay15). We wanted to avoid one author taking more credit than the other. Kingfish's DeviantArt has characters as well as the story, but the FimFiction version has the final say on what is canon (due to updates and edits).
Link to DeviantArt

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 12 )
Comment posted by Notional Materials deleted Apr 26th, 2014

y̸̛o̶͞͡u͡ ̢h̨͢av́e̷̛ ͜͠s͝͡tu͘͝m͞b҉̧l͠e̵d̷ ́up̷̧͝o̡͜n̵͜ ̛͟s̢ò̧͡m̡̨e̶̕t͟ḩ̕͟iǹ҉̨ǵ͠ ͘y̨̡o̶҉u҉̧ ͟҉s̢̀h͝͠ǫu̶l͡dn͏͝'́̕ţ͡ ̶̨͜h̸̶͡a͏̷͏v̕͟͜e̕͢ i͡t̴̶͟s̶͠͝ ͏͞y̧ơ̷̡ù͟r̶ ̕͝ ̵̴̢p̡at̷̸́h̀ ͏t̛o͢͏̕ ̷̧҉w͏̸̡a͞lķ̧͞ ͢͞nơw̵.̕ ̴ ̨͜

Why are so many people disliking this? Please tell us so that it can be improved.

:ajsmug:Don't worry sugarcube, I just broke the tie and put it towards the thumbs up. I actually love it! Can't wait to start the other chapters.

Just a tip, Instead of "Oh ma gosh" How about something a pony will actually say like, "Dear Celestia!!"

4657341 well, he's been isolated in that facility all of his life...he's not exactly familiar with pony behavior.

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