Upvotes went from 11 to 15 when I clicked on it...

...my powers are advancing!

*ahem*

All jokes aside, good story so far. Looking forward to seeing more!

We do need a Royal Guard tag.

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I second that reaction.

“Ponyfeathers!”

and we were just getting to the good part

good work man
as if you ever did anything less then good

I guess Luna's pink disguise is based of of her unused makeover in Luna eclipse

4289290 mine went from 20 to 27...I am more powerful!

4289346 IMPOSSIBRU -- I am a Princess!

plzzz from 9 to 27 xD

4289373 Well I clicked 'submit' and got thirty.

Your move.

After that I think he deserves another go to make up for the headache hes gonna have.

4289373 and I am Saint!

4289380 ...touche.

Shit just got serious!

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHH SHIET! Need next chapter!

I'm liking this very much!

Why do you people read pony porn? Clearly, you should get yourselves checked out. Masturbating to other people is acceptable, but masturbating to ponies is just pushing it.

4290242 4edgy6me

4290242 Why do you people watch cartoons? Clearly, you should get yourselves checked out. Television of other people is acceptable, but television of cartoons is just pushing it.

4290242 Annnd one check of your favorites list shows that you're just trolling.

0/10

4290242 I for one find it less awkward to wank to a fiction character then to a real life person. So long as it's pony on pony I don't mind but I prefer anthro. Human on pony... morally questionable but they don't exists so in the end no one is getting hurt.

Plus, I find that even with the porn, the purity and magic of the show isn't really corrupted or tainted. It's a separate thing in and of it's self. No one is turned on by real ponies man. We just like to see our favorite characters have a good time.

You know you could have worked this under Reprobate... I'm still waiting for an update on that.

It was going so well up until he got clocked in the face with a hoof. Oh well, maybe when he wakes up in the hospital he can just pretend it was all a dream... A very hot and wet dream... Heh heh.

Luna will need that disguise again. If she wants to get rutted by anyone not an alicorn, she'll either need to shrink herself or get the stallion a ladder.

(Might want to swap out the f-bomb for "rut" if we're going to stick to our pony puns when swearing during sex, as Luna did)

4290312 Why do you people watch people on Tv? Clearly, you should get yourselves checked out. reading books of other people is acceptable, but television of people is just pushing it.

4290484 Why do you people read about people in books? Clearly, you should get yourselves checked out. Watching other people on youtube is acceptable, but reading of people is just pushing it

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Why do people people people people people people people peopleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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4290242 You've commented on 5 stories I have read. Hope you liked what you have read

4290242 People read it, because it`s entertainment in a way. They enjoy it, some find it to laugh, like I do. I personally find it funny that two equine beings have similar sex to ours. If you don`t like it, tough shit. It`s here to stay and it`s not leaving. Just going to have to live with it, because every other Brony has. I used to despise Clopfics, but now I read them for laughable purposes. Also, every fanbase had people who fap to the show. I dismiss you, dear creature.

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check the guys favorites..

4291301 Just did. Bloody Trolling bastard...

YOU GOT KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT MAN!

AnonPeg, Seriously, work on AotH:Vol4.

I miss Kuno, Warden, and Swarm...

4292127 I actually just typed an entire new sentence of that.

4292232 ...

I have that kind of OCD where an unfinished story (that I like) makes me pissed off...
Your lack of completion on it pisses me off...

Stop pissing me off please?

4292384 Shut up and read the new chapter. It's short, unfortunately.

4292412 I just saw that you posted the new chapter, gonna read it now.

When will you work on the next one?

4292419 No idea. I have muchly stuff to touch on and have to choose how to handle it all.

4292429 Well I still think you should focus on AotH a bit more than you have been, but that is because I am a sucker for good changeling romances...

4292412

S...Sturdy Pike?

4290242 I went to get myself checked out but my doctor was a pony and I ended up fucking him

pft Anonymous Pegasus strikes again! Well written and a very good and (pun intended) punchy, ending.

I haven't read that far, but I can't help thinking that the booze must be really getting to him if he can't recognize his princess from her archaic speech patterns alone.

4290242 Heh-heh. You said "pushing it". Heh-heh.

4290242 BE PREPARED FOR ME TO FUCK YOUR ASS TILL' IT BLEEDS COCKSUCKER.

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No one is turned on by real ponies man.

...What if bestiality is their kink?

This was good, and funny for a clop fic. I usually don't read this sort of thing, but for this. I shall continue.

Well, that was interesting. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.

4295186 It's a little more complicated than that.

It's a social thing. For some reason, I can't find a really good analogy, but this will just have to do. Now, let's just say you believe in christianity, and everything about it. (just for the metaphor) Now let's change a few things. Jesus Christ is a female, she's alive right now, and she's coming on to you. You're just a regular old human. Do you really feel comfortable screwing the daughter of god? Do you really feel comfortable engaging such... animalistic behaviors... with a divine figure, a being who is supposed to be so many levels higher than you, on the social ladder?

That's what this guard is feeling. He found out he just screwed the princess. Maybe she wanted it, but i'm sure he still feels incredibly uncomfortable now, because he just screwed not only his boss, but pretty much one of the most powerful ponies in all of equestria, pretty much a "god" character compared to him.

Maybe at the end of the day, all ponies are simply ponies, similar to how all humans are simply humans... but we can't help but create these notions in our head of a sort of... 'rank' associated with ourselves, and others... and, for example, depending on who you are, you might view one of the following "President Obama", "Katy Perry", or "Bill Gates" to be a being higher than yourself. Yes, all these people are just as human as you or I, but we create these notions that they're "higher" beings, due to many reasons, such as political power, popularity, or economic wealth. And good lord, a princess... that's basically all 3 combined.

4290242 Aww... looks like someone is hungry! Sorry little guy, I brought some anger with me to feed to you, but the park authorities confiscated it, saying that only "official zoo staff" are allowed to feed the trolls. Sorry buddy.