This story is a sequel to Bon Bon Thinks Griffons Aren't Real
(dis)Like what you read? Tell me why! ~Super
Celestia has taken a liking to Shining Armor. Luna has to convince her of why this is bad, and that she should look elsewhere. And why is Big Mac so laconic anyway?
The penultimate book of four stories in the Dr. Luna Moon the Suffering Psychiatrist Series
-Trixie Complains About Random $#!%
-Bon Bon Thinks Griffons Aren't Real
-Celestia Has a Questionable Infatuation With Her Niece's Coltfriend, Who's Also Her Apprentice's Brother, Not to Mention Captain of the Royal Guard
-All Things Must Pass, Including Kidney Stones
Chapters (1)
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That title
I love it
Thumbs up for that
Best waffle I've seen in awhile, thumbs down for bad grammar for the title though.
5622394
Please elaborate?
5622415
caps for every single first word, and that a is tiny not BIG
should be
Celestia has A questionable infatuation with her niece's coltfriend, who's also her apprentice's brother, not to mention captain of the royal guard
5622431 http://titlecapitalization.com/# Hate to break it to you, but you're wrong. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/inquisitive.png
5622447
A should be capitalized. Just saying.
Celestia Has A Questionable Infatuation with Her Niece's Coltfriend, Who's Also Her Apprentice's Brother, Not to Mention Captain of the Royal Guard.
Also fullstop to finish the sentence.
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Lowercase articles (a, an, the), coordinating conjunctions, and prepositions.
http://english.stackexchange.com/questions/32884/should-i-use-a-period-at-the-end-of-a-headline
5622628
PFFFF
And starting a sentence, which is a big no-no.
Grammar is wrong, you're keeping the -1 until it's fixed
5622647 http://grammarist.com/grammar/conjunctions-to-start-sentences/
5622661
all i got was fuck da grammar
woop lets roll with that see what happens no grammar at all
yeah this will be awesome lets also have slang
u r leg bro wis u r king coz then no grammar & spelling
thx m8
5622671 WHEN GRAMMAR IS OUTLAWED, ONLY OUTLAWS WILL HAVE GRAMMAR!
5622699
and on that day
I will lick your nose and sell you for a dolphin
5622705 Ooooh, I like it when you talk dirty to me. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/cheese.png
thumbs up ^w^
lol I like it
5623551 Thanks.
5622846
That's what she said
huhuhu
it's funny coz it's true
5629439
>Implying I have a special somepony in my life
>Iwish.jpg
5629442
Sister?
Female Cousin?
Cactus?
anything Will do, well apart from the cactus
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What is, this, TwiArmor?
(Whatever you do, don't search Derpibooru for suitable images!
)
5629464
too late, Shining wasn't too happy
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when you see, you can never unsee
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>2014+1
>Greentexting anywhere other than 4chan
>Using emoticons in your story
>Using "le ebin reddit maymays xD" in your story
Christ.
5637980 I've definitely reached for some low-hanging fruit here. And unfortunately it's mostly moldy and rotten. I just wanted to get the start of the damn thing published. It's been sitting around for half a year.
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Finish the story and you will have redeemed yourself.
Bloody ale, that escalated quickly!
Will this ever be continued?
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Eventually
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All right then.
Still can't access the "All Things Pass Including Kidney Stones" story T_T.
But this is a good start to Luna going crazy ... again. Poor, poor Wuna.