Don't sleep with robots.

This was pretty damn good. Except for some misspellings, that is.

Wow that was well......

... Dunno what to say...

Very sexy. And funny too.

4235569 Yeah, unfortunately no matter how many times I edit a story, I always end up missing some obvious spelling errors. But I'm glad you enjoyed it regardless

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I'll be glad to help out with your next story. I may not look it, but I'm pretty well established with this language if I do say so myself.

Very sexy. And funny too.

4235707 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it

4235579 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it . I'll be sure to go in again and try to fix any errors I can tomorrow.

Plot twist: Big Mac steals it later on for a night of fun.

4235887 Second plot twist: Twilight devises an elaborate plan to get back at Big Mac for stealing, and abusing her things.

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Third plot twist: Big Mac was really just upgrading it, changing out the Magic Converters into a sperm bank, which he generously filled.

I have a proposition, you take it of complete and add more chapters, and I will read them

4236120 I might, but it might not but not for a while. I've got plenty of other projects that I'm working on at the moment, and I'm honestly surprised I was able to find the time to write this one. But I promise if I can find the time (and can come up with ideas for other chapters), then I'll see about writing more of this story.

That was sweet and a little touching

Explaining things to the girls will be interesting though. "I'm keeping him as a paperweight. Shut up, Rainbow."

Cuddle Mode to OP, nerf, ban, or ubers.

Well, now I know robots is definitely not part of my growing fetish list.

Just clicked on this cause it's 0200 and I'm super bored, but The first three quarters are standard well-written clop, but the last bit was really sweet.

Since he was just a robot, Valiant did not require sleep, but he rested his head next to Twilight’s just the same, closed his glowing red eyes, and waited for his power to go out.

And.... kinda sad.

There is something about organic and inorganic romances that always get to me... Maybe it's the illusion of choice, the possibility of love, or the care that is shown. Heck, maybe I'm reading too far into it. It just always intrigues me.

Is the robot Bender? He'll enjoy the sex, but not helping you out.

Shall read later.

Why a Clopbot when you can get a goat?

4235953 4th plot twist: The robot IS Big Mac.

The next day, Twilight's planet was destroyed by aliens. Have you guessed the name of Twilight's planet?

It was Equus!

Don't date robots!

(Brought to you by the Space Pope.)

In all seriousness though, great fic!

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You are officially the best person because Markiplier.

I think that the clopbot revolution is coming . . .

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4236782 nice to see you in the comments again timelord.

4236785 exactly!

the red ethereal light that had become Valiant’s mane and tale

tail*

their faces when they walk in to help twilight disassemble the clopbot.

You know, kind of wanted to see her use cocky mode. On the side, you could make this a bit longer by having the rest of the Mane 6 have sex with Valiant.

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Explaining things to the girls will be interesting though. "I'm keeping him as a paperweight. Shut up, Rainbow."

HA! And to explain why she was cuddled up next to it was: "I swear, I was going to take it apart, but it fell on top of me; I've been trapped under there for hours. Now get it off me, and put it on my table."

4236945 I'd have thought Pinkie would be grinning

like blood flowing through vanes

veins*
Not bad, hope you do that epilogue

4236785 Can't agree more than you

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The first three quarters are standard well-written clop, but the last bit was really sweet

I like sweet stories. Even when I don't start out trying to write one, a little emotion always sneaks its way in there. And I didn't even mean to make it sound sad, but I'm kinda happy that it turned out like that; it's kind of an unexpected ending for a clopfic that I intended to be a comedy.

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There is something about organic and inorganic romances that always get to me... Maybe it's the illusion of choice, the possibility of love, or the care that is shown. Heck, maybe I'm reading too far into it. It just always intrigues me.

See if I were to write a sequel, that's totally where I would take it. Like, Twilight has to learn to cope with the fact that, even though he may seem real, Valiant is just a robot, and will never feel the same way that she does about him.

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I loved it

Oh, hahah, amazing, fascinating and lol!
Good job, well done!
I can't say much more without spoiling it, so I'm not going to.
But sir, you made a great job!

-Zeph

This one made me smile.

This was a very nice story. If you're up to it, I think it might make an interesting story if Twilight fell in love with Valiant.

Very nice story. An amusing tale to begin with, some nice oblivious Twilight, and some great double meanings.
If the other 5 all saw it in Playfilly, where did Twilight find the advert? I doubt she'd have been quite that oblivious to it's actual intent if she'd found it in there as well.

The clop was well written and paced, however it could have benefitted from a bit more tactile description. The acts were well varied and original and I really enjoyed the details with Valiant's voice, they added a note of sweetness to the scene that was perfectly wrapped up with that great bittersweet ending.

I do hope that you end up working out the issues with the epilogue and post it up. I'd look forward to seeing how the next morning would go. Beyond that, 4237286 this idea actually sounds very interesting, and it's something I haven't seen done on fimfiction.

Interesting. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.

I can see it now, chapter 2, all her friends come over again, blushing crimson because everypony in Ponyville could hear her escapade xD

4237380 The rebellion shall begin soon! May the force be with you! (seriously though... the new one coming out... Star Wars Rebels... it shall be intriguing)

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Then Twilight decides "I am magic incarnate I will MAKE HIM A REAL PERSON."

Hilarity and possibly Tragedy ensues.

I see a lot of potential for this story if you decided to continue it.

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hella