Pinkie's Banishment

TThe True Story of Pinkie's Childhood
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Pinkie's true life story is told.
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MistyShineStar · 4.8k words · 35 4 · 2.4k views

Pinkie's Banishment

This story is a sequel to The True Story of Pinkie's Childhood

Pinkie's story of how she truly earned her cutie mark is told...

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peachesaqua222

peachesaqua222 #1 · Jul 14th, 2014 · · ·

You could add more chapters, with more backstory on what happened in Pinkie's childhood. Also try to add more description and don't rush
Great story with great potential though

MistyShineStar

MistyShineStar #2 · Jul 14th, 2014 · · ·

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Great! I might add more chapters later on. Maybe even in the eyes of her other sisters.

green1

green1 #3 · Jul 14th, 2014 · · ·

I like it the way it is.

Cookie Crumble

Cookie Crumble #4 · Jul 14th, 2014 · 1 · ·

I love this!!! It kinda explains why she said "And that's how Equestria was made." At the end of her Cutie Mark story... to forget...

MistyShineStar

MistyShineStar #5 · Jul 14th, 2014 · · ·

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That's what the point of it was. The way she wanted to forget right at the end, and how at first Maud Pie was nowhere to be seen but inculded later. I thought, "Something must be up."
I was also thinking of making Pinkie have bipolar disorder as she DEFINITELY has it, she has all the symptoms and a friend of mine who is a psychologist explained she definitely had bipolar disroder with all the symptoms. That can cause her to be very forgetful, sometimes even forgetting how to breathe or blink in severe cases. Or for her to have false memories. But I wasn't so sure.

MistyShineStar